So cute... Even though it doesn't seem like Folken-ko and Van have a good brotherly relationship in the series, that doesn't me we can't dreeeeam! *_
I LOOOVE YOU FOLKIE!*Seiya Slanzar de Fanel(Who else?)

Good poem!

"Shatei" means "brother" between comrades. Not the blood-related siblingship. :D So in a way, the dictionary was right!

one of ur very good poems! keep up the good work!*Marisusa*

Little brother in Japanese is 'Ototo' not shatei.

I know cause i'm taking Japanese.

That was good...*Sniff* I think I'll add it on favs...I liked the off beat rhyming rythm it had...:D

I have never heard "shatei" but then I am not fluent or anything. The word I know for little brother, and that I hear used is "Ototo".

Love Folken, and its nice to see someone elaborate on that reading scene.

really good! it even rhymes, something i suck at doing! *applause* well, i love folken poetry (it just makes me want him more) and this one's really good, so keep writin em!

wow... *sniff* I loved it! SUGOI! _ That was soooo sweet... I wouldn't know much about Japanese so I'm not sure Shatei means little brother, but I'll trust your sources... _ well jan-ne sketch-san! keep on writing!

Lordess

oh, it's so sad and sweet i aplaud you sir lady sketch

Wow..this is good. Its almost like Folken is telling the future about him and his brothers separation. *sniff sniff* Its a really nice poem. I love it!

That was truly good! I loved it and it was well written and it made sense and I'm a sucker for Folken and Van fics anyways. Very good, hope to see more of you,

Fire

That was great. I really liked it. Please write more poems and such soon. _