... I think my head just exploded.

Why haven't you updated in 3 years if you already had it planned out? WHY? It is so cruel!

Past that there is another Ryoko Saotome sequel

planned, "The Ryoko/Saotome Template" but not

completely outlined that focuses on Tenchi's daughter(Lina Saotome age 17, minor Slayers fusion here) and

Akane's son (Jason Hibiki age 21) and they're first

cousins so no icky thoughts

How can we not have icky thoughts when you have included the Tenchiverse in all its incest promoting glory? *grin*

Mihoshi has some acheived Super Saiyan status and generally constantly remains super because "she likes blonde hair.
I am stealing that line. I don't care if it warps a fic beyond belief I am going to use it!

Shouldn't Ranma be yelling cat and running at the sight of Fam?

You need to spell out what's happening in some of the scenes. There is so much going on that it's hard to tell.

Kasumi smiled as the chaos continued. Now it

seemed more like home again, she walked to the

telephone to contact the contractors.

LOL

I love the way things are fitting together.

I don't even recognize half of the anime series involved. Good work!

Kasumi considered it and shrugged, Ranma would be

expecting it.*grin
Great line.

LOL. I love the premise for this one. Lets see how well you use it!

BTW You need to work on the formatting.

I really like this story! Even though I am a bit confused since I don't really know RoLW that well and I don't know Devil Hunter Yohko at all. but still, this fic's funny and thus quite entertaining. The only thing is who are Artemis and Hecate. what show are they from. Anyway, please continue this fic!

To be nitpicky, I'm going to suggest Find/Replace for "Nadoka". I'm sure you are by now aware that it's "Nodoka". And some of the dialogue is confusing, due to the nature of formatting. Otherwise, this is a promising idea to run with, and I sincerely hope you do not trip and fall.

love all your work please update soon.

Nate? OHHH, HELL!

Great, and funny, fan fiction...By the way, the Ryu (of Street Fighter Fame) refrence in chapter 1 (and 2) was a nice touch too. I think you should pull Ryu into this soon though. After all, he's never really MET Ranma before, and what would he think about the curse? I know that sounds serious, but Ryu IS a serious kind of guy, and he'd take all the weirdness in a calm, cool, and collected manner, expecially after meeting Two Succubi (Morrigan And Lillith), A Cat Woman (Felicia0, A Mummy (Anakaris), a few Robots (Megaman, Servebots, Roll, Seteniel, Cyber-Akuma, Jin's Blodia), Psychic Fighters (M. Bison, Athena Asamiya, Rose), True Evil Incarnite (Akuma), Mutants, Witches (Tessa), Ninjas from the Future (Strider), and a man with a Laser sword (Hayato) just to name a few, He'd take it as another chapter in his life...After all, Ryu doesn't ever seem surprised, even if his oppenent is the size of the empire state building...