Oh my... this was a thoroughly lovely story. Just perfect. I am so very glad that you did not get graphic with Harry and Ron's personal life. A romance is wonderful, but I don't care for graphic slash. This was a quiet, comforting romance, and an endearing growth of a family. Beautiful!

That was positively, absolutely, ecellently... AMAZING! my FAVORITE! It was so greta, I couldn't stop reading... man'oh'man that was great~ you rock... thanks for the awesome read!

Thanks for writing more. It is an interesting epilogue but a lot of it was the same, just from the older Snape's POV. I would of enjoyed it more if it added more to the story, maybe something that happened in the 5 year space before he appeared to Harry. I love your stories and hope you are writing more Harry Potter stories.

Aww, how sweet! I do love a well-written child!Snape fic! Congratulations on a job well done!

So glad to see this addition. I loved it,this is one of my favorite stories and I reread it when I get too much angst from other stories and any addition is welcome. I am glad the 'adult' Snape was aware of what Harry did for Sev and that he got to feel the 'warm touch of magic' himself. Anything else you want to add would be welcome also. I find myself wondering about Dru.
Thanks again.

you did good in giving us that part. It was lacking before. Now it gives the story so much more ^^

It is a precious chapter.

By far one of the BEST stories I've ever read. Ranks right up there with Great Expectations. It was an amazing read--thanks for sharing that.

I'm happy Sev won't be a git.

I did enjoy Professor Snape's point of view. I wondered if the little child and the Professor would share a soul or not. You gave me the answer here in the 2nd Epilogue.

Thank you.

Loved it! I adore all your fics, and this one was no exception.

I liked the new epilog very much.

we so don't have enough Harry/Ron out there. And sev is waycute.

Great addition. I love the idea of Snape living with his 'grandparents' and 'uncles' in the after life. That's just fun.

Albus gets to live in this fic--yay! Thank you for sharing.

I love your stories and this ending just seems so cute and sad and great all at the same time. Now that it is here, the story seems more complete, even though I didn't even notice it was missing anything. You have great talent and I love the way you let it end. It was beautiful. Great work!

I've read this story several times and enjoyed it immensely. However, there is a small part of this chapter which I find very jarring: Harry's immediate assumption that the child who collides with him is his Potions Teacher, Severus Snape. This seems perfectly logical to us as readers, since we're rather expecting it, but it is not a reasonable assumption for Harry to make. It would be far more likely for him to assume that the child is a relative of Snape's, due to the physical resemblance - not Snape himself. Mind you, I can see him observing the mounting evidence and eventually coming to the conclusion that it is Snape, but not the very minute he first sees the child. The human mind tends to follow the path of least resistance in times of stress or surprise. Which is simpler: the child is Snape magically deaged, or the child is related to Snape in some (however distant) fashion? For someone not raised in the magical world, I think the second choice would be the most likely first assumption.
Looking forward to reading more of your stories.