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Reviews For: The Wind

BSparrow 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abuseI think this is so amazingly beautiful. I've read it before and I keep coming back to read it again, so I figured I better send a review! I think its amazing, it captures the spirit of Penny Lane so well. You've got a lot of talent and I wish you would write another one! = )
LucyxInxThexSky 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseThis was great, really poetic, but most of all, you capture Penny's personality perfectly. (:
scurge 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI loved this, especially the "lover who wasn't a friend and a friend who wasn't a lover."
thissesshoumaru 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseOh, I love this. Please continue. I would love to see where it goes from here.
ametomoe 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abusei like the idea of penny lane rambling on and on like when she tells william :if you don't fall in love (or whatever it is lol) you never get hurt, if you never get hurt you always have fun, but i kind of with this story had been a little slower. sometimes i think you got kind of caught up in the flow and changed the grammer mid-sentence, so really establishing a flow (though i have no idea how to do that) would really help. for a second i though about recommending using bigger or fancier words, but that's not in the character of penny, cause she's pretty, but she's not everything. this was a neat read - keep writing!
CaramelBoost 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuse[The tour is kisses and naked bodies and friends who are lovers and lovers who are friends.] Aww. I have no idea why, but that line stuck with me :D Even though I don't know what's going on, I really like the emotions the writing invoked and the description. You have talent, babycakes !! I love you !! x

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