You should write a sequel.

Oh, WOW. Get the sequel out soon! That was a MAJOR cliffhanger you left us with. Sorry I havent reveiwed, I've been busy. But, anyways, good, good story. I enjoyed it a lot. Well written. Del is a really well shaped character and I've really loved hearing her narrate. What was the song at the end?

hey! i hav finally gotten back to reading this!

awesum chapter! rly well written!

*falls over, twitching happileh* See, we need to plot this. Chicago, y'say? *grins* I think we can work that...

OMG you used a song from "Spirit". I love you. Now, I know that sounds awkward but...what can I say? I'm only being honest! haha, just kidding (sort of). Love the story so much. I wanna re-read it. Wish I had more time :( is there gonna be more Iggy-Delilah action next chapter? cuz no one will complain if you throw in a bit more...*hinthintnudgenudge* (haha, nudge nudge? get it?)
:P

I KNEW IT. Derek is making a (sorta?) reappearence...I think? I hope... hinthint...

Whoo, update!
Yeah...
Nice, long chapter...how long, exactly, did this take you?
Nice characterization. I love Max and Del's little chats. They're like twins.
Okay, peace out.

gr... i looked at the reviews and spoiled something for myself...
anyway, i havnt been reviewing 4 the otha chappies, so...
AWESOMENESS! I LUV IT SO MUCH!
i rly think mor ppl should read it, though, becuz its one of the longest (and best) storys. its weird cuz all the super long ones i see hav lots of reviews. (hehe... i accidently wrote all 'the longs ones i see r rly long'. im weird.)
OKAY, ANYWAYS...
AWESOME STORY!

I still do NOT like you for killing off Derek. :P
Otherwise, good chapter.

...
NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME I THINK THIS IS!!
and this is just the prologue...

Okay, I read it, I'm reviewing, update soon...please... :)

WHA?! You killed Derek!!
Other than THAT...
good chapter!

This is REALLY good. Me like, me like. Lots of detail and good dialogue. :) Keep it up, lovie.

Hey! No more chapters! Grr.

Exellent, exellent job so far. Love it. :)

My mom's trying to make me read Tom Sawyer, cuz that's my homework and I don't wana...

Sorry for the random info.

The thing I like most about your story is the character development. It's really well done, and Delilah and Derek are really believable.

When will your next update be? You left Del at a cliffie. :(

Well, no, not really.

But. Moving on.

Love it and want more. :)

Great, exellent job so far. I love it. One thing though, try and space the paragraphs a little farther apart, it's kinda hard to read when the text is all bunched together. But the story is FABULOUS.