This story was so emotional and sad while poor Severus was suffering! Glad he's better. The ending of this chapter was quite funny. PLEASE update this story! I LOVE your stories that I've read.

UPDATE! I hope you update soon, happy writing.

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this is great! i love this story... aw albus soon to be canary albus!!

Dear Raven Dancer, I've read and enjoyed your stories many times. I especially like "Summer Lessons" , this one ,and "a Promise to be Better"Even though they are a little too sweet at times, they are still very nicely done. You have given many fans a great gift and we are extremely grateful. Much love, barb

I love it! Plain and simple!
The Swordsman

Oh, a very nice touch of "leave them with a laugh". I do love your stories. I hope there isn't anything wrong with your life or health because I noticed that your posting fell off sharply after early 2001, and there's nothing after April of 2004.

If you need someone as a sounding board for upcoming stories who's familiar with muggle medicine and can comfortably handle a technology heavy discussion before you write for your audience, you can contact me at zafaran at fastmail. fm

or if you've got a writer's block, I can personally recommend THE ARTIST'S WAY by Julia Cameron. When I'm consistent about doing the Morning Pages and Affirmations there is a massive difference in my creative output both in quantity and quality (as well as general contentment in life--it helped work through the last of the grieving process after Mother's death when I first started working with Morning Pages, and there is a noticeable difference in how I handle life in general when I'm consistent about them).

Keep up the very good work. Zafaran

zafaran at fastmail. fm

Oh yes... I definitely love your fics, even if everybody is acting way out of character *lol*... It's so cool to see Severus calm and fair and DD stern and angry :-D... I love it how you describe *everything*, even going to the loo and what the people are having for dinner. And this one is once again the right mixture between hurt (poor Sevvie!), comfort (Albus + Barnes x 2 = rule!) and fun (yeah, canary creams! LOL). Great fic, thank you! :-)

OK, I officially love ALL your HP fic! It's nice to see someone own up to the fact that EVERYONE has to urinate, and that'accidents' happen even to the most prudish. And the Chux pads! Too real! And I know some nurses who wouldn't mind having the occasional levitation spell available; beats a Hoyer lift...

Also found this one on another site. I absolutely loved this story! One of my favorites, I'll be reading it many more times in the future. I loved it when Severus told the twins, "You have caused me intense pain and suffering" -something so compelling about him displaying his humanity, as it were. Terrific!

Yet another fabulous story, and I loved the last line :)

extremely cute and intersting!
M.Moony

oh...shiny...

*snicker* Bwahahahahahahahahaha! I like how you potray Snape here. Not so nice that it was unbelievable but I do wish to know how he became friends with Harry though...and where did he get those canary creams?

really enjoyed.

Very nice ending...kawaii! Ehhh...fairly good punishment....fair but just doesn't seem to just considering what they did. Still very good fic!