Ha! That was a great story! I think everyone was completely in character, and the plot is good, too. I can't wait to see what happens next. And I loved Prudence's line: "Only Max could get that fucked at two in the morning." So true. I could totally see all of this stuff happening. I hope you update again soon!

Oh, this is so lovely! The style is extremely intriguing - the little intervals separating the segments are very powerful and insightful. You also put a touch of your own into the characters, not so much that they're out of the character, but that they're people we can't predict, and I LOVE that.

I'm definitely intrigued - this is gorgeous.

My goodness, you are talented.

It was funny and heartbreaking and sad and uplifting and just...amazing. No criticisms whatsoever.

Just absolutely lovely, and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Much love to you and your amazing skills

Katie