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| uzukun7 2008-06-08 ch 7,  | abusethe whole rain thing works. its funny how the random weather can affect those who already have a lot of guilt in their hearts and show what they truly are on the inside. they both realize its a bit irrational to be crying over rain but naruto completely gets her and was able to diffuse the situation. in either case i hope you update soon. laterz |
| Hinafan16 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abusevery interesting. i like how you imply things and leave it to us readers to take it how we like. it gives us room to imagine what the situation could be. interpret it into our own meaning. your a really good writer. More please! XD |
| Lady Dark Angel 2008-05-24 ch 7, | abuse* rubber necks around a corner* anymore..? I do love these ^^ some so sad, others warm and comforting, i love the contrasts! |
| Lady Dark Angel 2008-05-24 ch 5, | abuseI liked this. I do love Naruto/Sakura its too sweet for words ^^ Lee/Sakura is good too (not AS good but good) and Sasuke/Sakura...I'd have to be in the mood to read the pairing ^^; but I mostly perfer Sakura/Naruto. They deserve each other, she needs his love(despite her current denial) and needs her love XD so cute! |
| Monica-san 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abusei hate rain too...sometimes...more more!! |
| aly247 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abusei liked this one! It was cute! |
| Spread-My-Wingz-And-Soar 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abuseaw [: so cute! great chapter update soon please |
| DrendeSalkash 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abusethat was a bit odd, but still very good. the rain was a good plot device to use as a basis for it. good job |
| Emma0707 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abuseNaruSaku always warm my heart, I love Naruto and he deserves to be happy, and I like Hinata too, but I don´t want her with Naruto. I really hope that it will be NaruSaku in the end. |
| animefan28 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abuseI thought it was very cute! :) Nice job! |
| isley 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abusethis was amazing. because narusaku isn't the most popular pairing of the series, there's a serious deficit of quality fiction written about them. their relationship is so dynamic, and i think you really captured a few facets of that here. the fact that they're both their own people, but at the same time, they're dependant on one another. these little chapters are perfect, executed skillfully, and in character on almost every occasion. i absolutely love it, and can only hope you write more of them. (: |
| Spread-My-Wingz-And-Soar 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abusehehe I thought it was funny how they seemed so old, or at least they felt like it [: cute chapter! update soon please |
| DrendeSalkash 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abuseits pretty good. interesting to see it from that angle |
| darkheart 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really deep and AWESOME XD keep up the good work p.s i love naruto and sakura as a pairing to |
| aly247 2008-05-03 ch 6, | abuseThis is great! I liked it alot! Pleaese make another! |