 James Birdsong 2009-08-13 . chapter 14 Wonderful fourteen chapters |
 Shiakou 2009-06-15 . chapter 14 Well, now that I've gotten over my laughter, it's time for a proper review.
First off, I love Tohru and Hisami as you portray them. Tohru's well meaning stupidity combined with his newly found sense of perversion is actually endearing and Hisami. . . Hisami's awesome. That's the only way to describe her: awesome.
Junior's past and how the Library's members have adjusted (or maladjusted) over the years was another highpoint. Plus the whole "aww" when his story finished and everyone hugged him.
Anita didn't get much screentime in this chapter, which is a shame. But on the subject of her hips, I cannot help but agree with Tohru. . . (Damn!)
I hope to see another chapter soon! |
 Alpha Draconis1 2009-06-15 . chapter 14Oh Wendy, if only you knew. . . bwahahaha. |
 Alpha Draconis1 2009-03-08 . chapter 13Unlucky 13. |
 Alpha Draconis1 2009-02-01 . chapter 12Perfect. |
 Alpha Draconis1 2009-01-02 . chapter 11Ahahaha! What should have been a dramatic moment was completely ruined (or made awesome) by Sonny Wong! |
 JDNightMhalelOsamaGhobhadi 2008-11-30 . chapter 10I nearly feel Junior's pain of wanting to be needed. Wanting to be accepted. Wanting to be wanted. It was no differnt back in Iraq when I served as a child soldier for the ''recruited generation,'' as locals called it. Read my profile for details. Anyways, I love this story. Keep the chapters going. |
 Alpha Draconis1 2008-11-29 . chapter 10Never thought he had it in him. Less funny, and more sad really. |
 Alpha Draconis1 2008-11-25 . chapter 7I am in awe of the perversion. |
 JDNightMhalelOsamaGhobhadi 2008-11-19 . chapter 1This story's a bit strange, however, it remains as a unique work of [perverted] art, though nothing too explicit, provocative in its own form. This may not make a whole lot of sense, but all I'm trying to say is I find it quite entertaining and am always anxious for the next chapter to be updated. I hope the ending is something to bite into. ''What do you prefer? A seductve tone of candles and a romantic cuisine for two, or perhaps a sprinkling of French cologne?'' You are truly a talented writer. Hope to see more works from you in the future. |
 Rhianwen 2008-10-31 . chapter 9Yay! An update of this story always totally makes my week. :D
Hee, between Awkward!Wendy and Bikinis-Only Friday Movie Night, I think it just about made my year. Awesome, as always. |
 sasahara17 2008-07-30 . chapter 6I am laughing very hard right now. This just keeps getting better and better! I can actually hear poor Junior whine in that British accent of his 'I'm not a stalker...'.
I really like what you're putting poor Junior through. If only Nancy would see her son now! |
 Rhianwen 2008-07-13 . chapter 5Totally loved this chapter; everything from the lovely father-daughter moment (Jenny and her Joyful Puffs and her giant seafood platter are just too cute!), to Junior's confusion over the sensation of blood on his hands, to Wendy actually feeling something other than discomfort for the poor kid, to the mood-kill ending. Especially the mood-kill ending. "And speaking of Dead Junior..." So awesome. XD |
 Rhianwen 2008-06-02 . chapter 4He, the bit with Tohru was amazing! Poor, poor guy - he really knows how to pick 'em. XD |
 sasahara17 2008-06-01 . chapter 4How the heck do you do this? This stuff is brilliant!
I love how you manage to pervert (pun intended) the events of the story into this hysterical series of unfortunate calamities, with the normally composed and gentlemanly Junior coming out seeming like the world's greatest pervert.
Putting this one on my Alert list, yes I am... |