This was a great story start and I'd love to see it continued! No fair leaving us hanging like that...

This is really good. But can you make it so that the story isn't in bold? It's easier for me to read that way.

Can't wait for an update!

~Bones

Excellent! Keep going!

Hello? Anyone there? Hello? Update? Anyone? Crickets chirping...

Interesting story. I hope you're able to updatesoon.

AH! This story is awesome!! I love it to peices. Great job, this is well written. Dont leave us hanging for too long!

I'm kinda freaking out after reading that - what is going to happen to Josh?


PLEASE don't leave us all hanging too long!!

I love this chapter! Josh is very in character. WE know he's scared but he's also acting the way he should by not giving away to much information. my fav bit

“Woah, hold on.” Josh interrupted. “You think the United States government are wrong in fighting the war on terrorism? You honestly think it’s okay for women to face public executions for violating the Taliban laws? When all they are trying to do is get a decent education?” That it’s okay for a man to rape another man’s daughter because she refused his hand in marriage? Because if you think that, that is all okay, then you’re the sick son of a **, not President Santos.”

I can so see Josh saying something like this. Love it! Keep it up and update soon!! x

Wonderful chapter. In an evil angsty hurt Josh kind of way... LOL I like that you don't shy away from the details... some writers do that. You do a great job without being too gratuitous. I still continue to like your characterizations. All very real. I hope that you show Santos'/Sam/Donna's/etc, reactions to seeing the video! I'm sure our Josh looks a little rough by now... it will be heart rending to see his loved ones' reactions to seeing him.
Anyway, write more SOON! Pretty please?

U have 2 update this soon, I'm in luv with it. I can't believe Josh has ben kidnapped omg! This is really good, I luv it so much!

Really good.I love where you are going with this.

You're keeping up the suspense- what will happen to Josh? Please keep posting.

NO WAY, are you kidding? I have to know what happens? ah

So exciting. What is going to happen to Josh?:(

Great chapter, I'm glad that Donna and the others now are aware of everything.

Can't wait for more.