| Reviews for Facade |
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allmondblossoms316 7/22/09 . chapter 2UPDATE! I found this story and I really like the gist of of. But then I saw you haven't updated in over a year! Please update, for me? |
awesomenessisme 7/9/09 . chapter 2You killed Angela! How could you? (sob) |
awesomenessisme 7/9/09 . chapter 1It's a good idea, to write about how other people feel when Bella's gone. I feel so jealous :K Anyway, keep up with the chapters! Can you maybe add some Mike or Charlie? |
Fleur24 6/2/09 . chapter 1I love Angela even more now! |
WhiteLotus95 4/5/09 . chapter 2You're right; it is rather sadistic...but I like it. I really like how you portrayed Angela's concern - she really is such a sweet person. Ooh! Ooh! Can I beta read? I really want SOMETHING to do! Pick me! Pick me! *waves hand in the air* |
BocMage 3/17/09 . chapter 2Thanks for a great and different story. I hope you do post the next installment as this a s nice change of pace. I agree with you that some times reading about Bella the all restraining gets to be too much at times, Regards, Mage |
gently 3/15/09 . chapter 2 I really liked this story. It has always bothered me how Meyer made it so ridiculously easy for Bella to cope with things, to keep everything she wanted. |
lurker 1/17/09 . chapter 1 Wonderful story! I love how it is unique in its POV and storyline. |
Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 12/18/08 . chapter 2more please this is extremly good |
geophf 11/18/08 . chapter 2This Angela pair of vignettes (Ben barely says hello) has the feel of being a complete story unto itself. Have you considered expanding these two chapters into an Angela and Ben story. It's always been a compelling idea for me: that Bella would reincorporate Angela into her existence to a much greater degree ("Hey, Angela, would you tutor Jacob so he can catch up with his girlfriend named Renesmee?" or some other such pretext). What I'm saying is these two chapters are sizzlingly good! I know you're exploring new directions for this story, and am looking forward to reading these new chapters, but your Angela and Ben story has also got me enthralled. geophf |
skeptiik 11/11/08 . chapter 2This is great! although I do think that Angela might be able to recognize Alice's or Edward's voice...but then again she is nearly unconscious. Please continue, I love it! |
edible frisbees 10/14/08 . chapter 2I postively love what you have written so far. I can't wait until you finnaly update it because it has been a while. This is one of the best fanfics that I've read written for twilight. Hope to read more of this story soon Irijjaa |
Britt01 10/3/08 . chapter 2Cool - I really enjoyed seeing this from Angela's POV. And the encounter with Bella not being quite what we would all expect from perfectly-controlled newborn-Bella is refreshing. I am looking forward to the other POV to come! |
NinjaWatermelon 9/28/08 . chapter 2Even though Breaking Dawn has come out, and not everything fits, i still think you should continue this. it's really good, and i already can't wait to hear Jessica's POV. so, please, do us all a favor, and UPDATE SOON! D |
Daedalos 7/9/08 . chapter 2Awesome! Can't wait to see everyone else's meetings with her! Great job! Thank you! -chris |