wow! great story? Are you gona conintue it? If you are then please continue!

Ja ne~

Cute. I'll have to re-read WYDTM.

Hmm. I must be in a sadistic mood, the thought of Fate turning Nanoha down because she's straight makes me smile today. That's unusual.

I'd quite like to see a part two, but that's because I'm a reading whore ;) The fic as it is stands fine. ^^

I do believe there isn't anything you write that I don't enjoy. This uberlent story is no exception of course. Though it was a little disappointing to see that there may not be a second part/ conclusion to this, but it doesn't make it any less of a great fic. Ah well, here's hoping to more anyway, whether it be from this fic or any of your other amazing NxF fics.

ohwie, i can feel Fate's pain... it's hurt! XO

Should I...say that I'm surprised?

I don't know...I'm not sure that I am, although...well, it makes me smile. Somehow...what you write manages to make me feel emotions I'd...rather not feel. But in the end...it...makes me smile. Is that funny to you? Hn, it is to me.

This is wonderful insight on Fate's psyche...it goes very well, although not entirely, with Nanoha's thoughts on my fic. Ha. Makes it better.

Funny, too, that I should be the one who knows what Yuuno is doing in this equation. That was a nice touch. Good memory. Heh. Guess how long it took me to write this? Ha.

Short but nice, I mean it.

You could say is similar, but I want to think it isn’t. is hard to identify when someone is speaking the truth to us, especially if you know what they said could be mean more than just a few drabbles. At least that’s what I think on this case.

Well, maybe we need a closure on this case, regardless the way you decide to take them.

It's...good. Full of near-misses and full-misses and fragments that wouldn't work with any other author. And it does work as a companion piece- put together, they are- very good. I seem to be lacking adjectives today, but...but it's- something bitterly happy, because it's not simply a matter of loving. And because Fate won't let her, it's- sad. Because Nanoha's so kind, and I want to shake them both. ^^' But. I liked it very much. The only odd thing is Yuuno, because I don't quite see how he factors in- he's there to remind Fate Nanoha already has someone, but after that it's like he just falls out of it. If this had chapters, I'd have a field day. *grins* Let us hope you get lots of reviews, then.
~Naolin (who doesn't think RoE V will need much editing anyhow, and wants it very badly)

Very, very nice.

Except for the fact that I'm beginning to dislike reading these on before I've seen them in my comp...And for the fact that a number of things need to go die so I can beta these first-day again. >_>

^^ Poor Fate, lovely. Makes you wanna hug her. Poor girl lost in between reason and desire. A little lack of action on her part which seems a little ooc(?! - i think it is >

This fic really got to me. It's a side known in the series, but not really shown in fan work. It really caputured her serious attitude, but I haven't read Arigato Sheitarou's work which I might look up now.

This fic would still stand pretty strong as just a one shot, but it'd be nice to know how Nanoha thought or if it continued off from when she just got back from the mission or how things happened as Fate's still there at the area away from Mid-Childa.

I was wondering about your other fics if they were being continued because they haven't been updated for a while. I'm guessing it's a monthly thing?

Anyways, nice fic. Hope to see more.

~Kioni

I don’t know why you added the Yuuno thing; if I remember correctly I think you said you wanted to experiment with that pairing in the A/N of one of your previous fics, but it seemed completely out of place for me in this fic, I can’t see a purpose for it in the issues of this first (and probably last) chapter, it wasn’t like in Fay’s one shots were this relationship was the main conflict in the development of the plot, but here I only see it as an unnecessary detail that ended up ruining my last appeal of your fic.
Other than that, this seems as good as always, but sadly I couldn’t enjoy as much as the other fics written by you.

Well, well, soldier...

I'm damn glad to baptize this chapter with it's first review:
This was some interesting piece of work, son.
Very deep, actually. Made me think. Good job.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!