 Crash Murphy 2009-09-24 . chapter 1I like this. |
 WhenLighteningStrikes 2009-03-19 . chapter 1"You don’t know if it’s the worse thing she’s ever told you, or the best."
Reallyreally brilliant. I mean I totally felt sorry for Noel. But this was so good that I'd have felt sorry even if it's been Truman (and *that's* saying something.) It's so heartbreaking. Minimal use of names (I dunno why but I always really like that), second person POV (which I used in my graduation speech *thank you fanfiction!* but I'm still to try it out.) And after reading this, I totally feel like writing something like this (because heck, it's really good)
And they do notice each other so much, don't they. I think that's why all of us never got off LWD even when Sally came into the picture, because Derek and Casey have this between-the-lines thing going on that totally makes up for everything else.
Oh, and Mike ships Dasey. I'm sure, his expressions are so totally worth *sqeeing* over and dying for!
"Derek already had the always."
totally true. I can't they brought Demily in (that's what I heard, I havent seen where) I thought they'd leave an open end :( But heck we have fanfiction, and anyone who can hear/see knows that Dasey goes beyond the plots that the writers keep bringing in to keep in all familial.
Loved this. I'd love an angsty!Derek story sometime :)
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 tennisplayerx33 2008-06-22 . chapter 1i love noel too! This was adorable(: |
 SNN 2008-06-18 . chapter 1I love 2nd-person fics. I loved this story. Good job. :) |
 AllyPorterAndShadyLane 2008-05-27 . chapter 1You captured Noel PERFECTLY! I loved it! i felt bad for Noel though but I absolutely loved it! i hope you write more noel/nasey fics! |
 splenetic 2008-04-20 . chapter 1I actually sniffled. You made me sniffle. NOEL made me sniffle.
Oh, hell. |
 dramacrazed101 2008-04-04 . chapter 1I really seriously thought it was Sam,but whatev.
Daseys are the best!! |
 unoriginal-elizabeth 2008-03-27 . chapter 1Poor poor Noel! This is just gorgeous - I think you did a great job of capturing the dynamic between all three characters - and I felt for all of them. I love the little touches you put in that really *show* how things stand - like Derek giving Casey her exact change, or the way he 'forgets' Noel's order. Really lovely fic. |
 True Love Lives Forever 2008-03-03 . chapter 1This was very beautifully written, and yes, it was definitily emotionally moving, that's for sure. You've done a great job with it. |
 argentenipinkini 2008-03-02 . chapter 1aw, poor noel. i feel so bad for him, but i totally think that's how it's going to be when casey and noel finally hook up. :( i really do think she likes him, though, she just has this weird thing for derek..haha. oh well. |
 MaybeBaby27 2008-03-01 . chapter 1Oh it worked really well! I really really liked this. I thought it was Noel from the start, but wasn't sure until you told us. I agree with you on the liking him and him being under played so far. |
 Chibi Mistress 2008-02-29 . chapter 1I think Noel is such an awesome character. & stories w/ good portrayals of him are hard to find. |
 victoria alexandra 2008-02-29 . chapter 1I know the point was to make you feel bad for noel, but i just can't quite do it. I feel for him, but he needs someone else. Casey and Derek are just meant to be. I will say in terms of writing it was fantastic. I loved it great job :) |
 skrypnyk 2008-02-29 . chapter 1oh my god, i love it, i agree, i really like noel and he doesn't get enough attention! |
 monkeypants17 2008-02-29 . chapter 1I really did love this, it was soo well written that I just melted at every sentence.
At first I thought it was Max that Casey didn't love but later on I was just thinking 'wow Max really seems sweet...this doesn't seem right o_O' lol and when I realized it was Noel I just melted some more :P
Great story, I loved how you keep everyone in character even Noel (who deserves more time on life with derek) wonderful story! |