"Nyasu evolved."
That made me lol so hard. xD

"Gijinka" and "Krazyshipper". I hear breaking the foruth wall.

THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING IN HISTORY O_0
I seriously choked up at the end- everything was absolutely PERFECT. GO KRAZYSHIPPING!

Aw. How cute. It's a very heartfelt story. I enjoyed it. Don't add any sex scenes later, please, that would ruin it.

Aw...that was so CUTE! Can't believe it's the last chapter though -sniffle- Surely there's something more! A villain! An accident! Crazy action in general! Comeon! This can't be it! TT.TT

Part of me wishes the whole story could've been real, as opposed to just being a dream.

Why didn't Nyasu sing his songs in English? I had no idea what he was singing, 'til I visited your profile and website. (FYI, I had to manually type in the URL of your site. Clicking on the link got me an error message for some reason.)

interesting story. 9/10. faved & alerted.

Aww, that was so cute! I liked it!! ^^

OMGWTFBBQ -fangirl squee- This is amazing! And thank God I'm not alone in thinking that NyasuxPika is a yaoi pairing, too. But seriously, I was giggling like an idiot through the entire thing. You rock for writing this. Very sweet, nicely written, although I will say it seems a bit rushed overall. But I love it nonetheless. Krazyshipping FTW.

Ack! So cute so cute so cute so cute so cute so cute!

I love Krazyshipping. It's so cute and adorable. Love the concept of what you've done!!

I'll bet anything that was a breif self-insert! lol. I'm back, obviously! Just fora little while though...anyways, great chapter, it was funny! I love chapters like this, it was so...random really. Keep up the good work!

Pika!

aw, how nice. Such a perfect couple. I'm crying at the beauty of it all! It's so good! Chapter 9 was good as well, but they were both put up so quickly that I couldn't review the other one. Great chapter! And no spelling/grammar mistakes that I can see.

Pika

How can team rocket be so oblivious to Nyasu's pain? It must be frustrating to him. I wonder what happened to Pikachu...

In the first paragraph, after the A/N, you forgot to capitalize 'he' afer a quote. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Pika!!

Ohh...Pikachu doesn't like Mewoth. Poor Nyasu. It must be really sad for him.

Spacing was messed up. Nothing else wrong though. (Man, I must be a bad beta, I never can find anything wrong with your chapters!!)

Pika!!

I have no idea what that said, but the end was good!! I can't exactly look for errors in that because, frankly, I can't understand it! The English part was good, though.

Just a confusing thought, but, is Pikachu a boy or a girl?? In chapter 4 it kept saying Pikachu was a boy, but then they kissed, so I don't know what to think!!

It was pretty good how the scene started, the perfect setting for the end.

Great job!!

Pika!