Great story, creative, too! Sydney's becoming something like the Scarlet Pimpernel, isn't he? Great story, though.

Everyone wins. I love it

Overall this is good. I get the feeling it was a tad rushed, but we all do that. Overall it needs imagery. You establish the who and what at the very beginning, but that's about it... Detail is limited to blood spilling from the knife wound. I feel like you were more concerned with killing everyone in France then making a good story. Personal opinion...