loved the story

Hey are you ever going to update on this? I really really like it! You’re doing a great job and might I add, better than the real thing, at least in 4 chapters you’ve had them kiss more then they did in two damn years….you know I loved that show but did they piss me off! Anyways back to your story, please update soon. You have to!

I thought this was a very good story. Logan goes only slight out of character in a few parts which is hard to pull off and the begining seemed to be a little rushed but i found it extremly good compared to a lot that i have read.

more more more I like it!!

Heh heh. Didn't see that last line coming. :) Good job.

I love the end to this! I was laughing out loud, even though i could see it coming. Kudos for stopping where you did. Most people would keep going and ruin the effect. That was a fun story. Hope you write more.

Good job
I like how you changed what happened only to a degree. The chemistry between Max and Logan was still there but with an entirely different history which set off a whole new chain of events. I liked it a lot. Good job.

lol, oh shes in heat, is she? oh please you have to continue. but is this the last chap?? i hope not, but if it is, please do a sequel to it. please. t/c

Ooooooooo!!!!!

LOL Nice twist at the end. This was really well-written. I enjoyed this alternate take on the pilot. Very cool, and a nice job. :)

that was so good. i love it. is there going to be more? please write more. it's good. it is good to read the same show yet different (the way you kept the main storyline yet changed it) i loved it.

Oh...ahem...so this is how you're ending this story. I shouldn't be surprised considering how much you accelerated their chemistry during the rest of the story. No barriers here. I love how her mere presence made him falter in his broadcast.

Heh. Bit of an 'enemies' vibe there, hon. But, hey! I know who all the characters are now. *dances* . (Okay, I had to read the mightybigtv recap because I thought it start at 9:30, not 8:30, but I still know who they are! Yes, yes, go me. I am the queen of the knowledgeable. Not the queen of spelling, apparently, though... ) Yes, this had a point. I don't quite remember what it was.

I love this! keep up the great work and post more soon!

Great story! Hope you write more soon!