It's very soulful. I really like it! I can hardly wait to see what becomes of it.

And I'm honored to be in the list at the top! _

I like the beginning It sounds like it will turn out to be quite interesting. And the quote is where he said "My duty as your father comes first" Something like that line right?

Can't wait for an update!

omg!its up!

i like how its going

can't wait to read the next chapter

update soon!

This is interesting and intriguing! Nice touch with the Egyptology book!

Thanks for the dedication!

Great work!

This is a good, strong start. There isn't too much that needs fixing. Keep it up. :)

The more you write, the better you'll get.