That was a pretty good chapter. At least I now know your really honest. Keep them chapters coming!

Great way to sneak Barkin back in. Liked how they 'backed into' criminal justice. Good family dynamics also. You've got a lot of good stuff going on here.

Very quick and unusual the way Kim and Ron were steered into their new careers. Kind of like someone was planning for this to come about...

So now someone inside of GJ is going to help Vince out with what happened to Team Possible? Good of Wade to step in, but hope he doesn't get into trouble with them. They seem to be able to make whatever they want to happen, happen..

Nice moment of 'Ew!' for Kim when the 'rents clued her and Ron on Saturday morning rituals. Wonder if that memory will hinder them in the future with her BF.

Seems Josh got away from the scenery a bit too well. Is he to pop up later?

As for work and all, I can relate somehow. Hang in and see ya next time!

CajunBear73

It seems to me them getting in law enforcement was a huge set up. I'm sure we'll find out eventually. Good story, keep it up.

Taking a little "Writers Prerogative", eh? Actually kinda, sorta works...

Barkin... is... everywhere...

Looking forward to the next chapter...

I can only imagine how badly Director's gonna get burned, but I really want to READ it.

Great job.

Now, who knows how many chapters I'll have to wait to see what they were fighting? (Really doubt it was a 'who'.)

Really good chapter, some good dialog, just enough hints to know that something was wrong. Everything just a little off. I really want to know who messed them up, and who's watching them now.

Oh. Sounds like a setup to me. Patiently waiting for the next one.

I agree...That entire 'sitch' screamed set-up. I'm going out on a limb here and say that this 'set-up' is a cover that GJ is using for something even bigger, and they didn't tell Kim and Ron... But that's just a theory...

So, I'm happy with it...

Until the next chap...

fantastic simply fantastic (to give you an idea i don't review unless i really really love the story)

Yeah, that was one big flaming paper bag of crap that GJ laid on Team Possible's doorstep with that 'mission' in the Alps.

Good bonding moment at 'The Bunker'.. Looks like Kim and Ron have a couple of new friends and allies. The skepticism of cops came out to play when all heard how the actual tale went down vs the 'official report'.

There was something a bit off about Drakken and Shego, huh? Kim wasn't able to scan them and Ron's MMP definitely picked up on something ominously familiar.

Looks like Team Possible was setup and not allowed to clear their names. From the way this one ended, there may be more rocks to be turned over and Kim and Ron may get their names cleared and the setup exposed.

See ya next time!

CB73

Wow! This is an awesome story. Hope to see more from you soon... uh... VERY soon.

Good to have you back Dude! Nice chase scene here. I could picture it all happening as I read.

Looking forward now to how you work in the past, and we find out what brought Kim and Ron onto the force.

I don't remember reading the other one, but this ones good. Looking forward to the next chap...

The description kinda reminds me of the Bourne Supremacy.

Yeah I remember your previous version of this. It was ok, and had a narration feel to it, but was alright.

So here Kim and Ron are working together as Colorado State Troopers and are banned from Team Possible activities and even talking to Wade. Must have been one hell of a screwup three years ago, or was it?

Now their first day on the job complete, with car chase, crash and shootout to boot (Ron would have been very pleased if this was a movie he and Kim, with her kicking and screaming all the way to the theater I bet, were to see) taking place. Seems that they are romantically involved as well as professionally, so that should give an interesting element to their work dynamic as well as off duty.

One of their new acquaintances seems to be interested in something about those two that will probably lead him on a very dark journey.

Bring it on!

CB73