|Reviews for Deception|
| SasuneUchiha 3/29/08 . chapter 7
NO! The cause of Kira is not bigger than than any one person's love, especially if that one person's love is L!I will NOT let you hurt him Light! NEVER!*gets weapons ready*
*sniff* aww...please Light, think about it threw and threw! Rule the world of ungrtefully stupid humans while being miserable; or help save the world behind a letter being happy with the one you love! Look at L, can you imagine living without that bundle of cuteness next to you sharing yoru love?
I wonder..could i kill the one i love the most for a world? *thinks and tears up with a sad smile* no, never. That...the world would never be worth the murder of my love.
*looks at chain sadly as it sits on the floor* The chain of fate has broken, a love meant to be has been destroyed by a shinigami. Mother Fate is angry now, her creations slowly falling apart. Can it be restored?
Anyhow, love it! I cant wait to read what happens next!
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!here *sniff* have an L and Light love plushie! *hands over plushie* :)
| The Carnivorous Muffin 3/29/08 . chapter 7
Ah poor L is going to die. That makes me sad. YOU MADE ME SAD! Gr, update soon.
| TwoSightsOfJustice 3/29/08 . chapter 7
aw... uber sad :(
| adrienne 3/25/08 . chapter 6
;) can't wait to read ore it is good already and if u will will u please write bacl and tell me how to write fanfics? ty. it was a great story!
| oztan 3/24/08 . chapter 6
| KnoxAingeal 3/22/08 . chapter 6
EERRGRG misa is stupid i would have just taken her deathnote and left her... L belongs with light so much better than misa does.
| UnknownZero 3/21/08 . chapter 6
Why was this funny? Love the Poe refernce! That was Poe, right? It's and I'm sleepy, but if I'm wrong than I need to go shoot myself since I kind of fancy myself as a poetry buff.
| Sora Ryuuzaki 3/21/08 . chapter 6
Oh my god. When Matsuda came in on them, I was about to like, break my computer. xDD This is good. I like the vocabulary, and the dialogue. However, I think it could use a bit more description: what the dinner looks like, what it is, all that junk. I love this. :] Keep going!
| Anonymous Sister of the Author 3/21/08 . chapter 6
misa is so stupid... no offense to people who like her!
| Amorpheous 3/21/08 . chapter 6
And she just had to ask when they were going to kill him. So sad.
Ahh... A drunk Matsuda is not good. Heh heh.
I can't wait for the next chapter! -huggles-
| The Carnivorous Muffin 3/21/08 . chapter 6
Misa is deluding herself.
Misa's deluding herself scene:
Matsuda: You know Light is gay for L, that's why you should sleep with me. You know, because I'm not gay. And I'm not sleeping with L so... (Matsuda raises eyebrows and points to a broom closet)
Misa: Matsuda are you drunk?
Matsuda: No... maybe... Yes. But I still think you look hot.
Misa:... I think your lying.
Matsuda: No it's true! I left my jacket at their house and I saw them sucking some major face!
Misa's vision of horror:
L is leaning over Light menacingly and in the background the psycho theme is playing.
(Later that day)
Misa: I know you're sleeping with L!
Light: Why would I do that?
L: Yes, why would Light-kun do that?
Misa: Ryuzaki chained himself to Light-kun, of course Misa's Light-kun was molested!
Light: She has a point.
Woo that was fun to write. Anyways, is it just me or are Light and L kind of obsessed with... um... doing eachother. Seriously, as soon as everyone leaves L jumps Light. And Matsuda has a HUGE mouth, he gets drunk and he blabs to Misa of all people. Does that scream idiocy to you as it does to me.
I bet Misa will kill L herself if Light takes to long. (Imagine's Misa in the dead of night slicing L's throat)
That would be a horrible chapter! Anyways keep on writing.
| SasuneUchiha 3/21/08 . chapter 6
lol, poor L. No sex. Poor Light also, has 2 put up with Misa.
STUPID ARSE MATSUADA! Damn you for getting drunk and telling Misa you freakin arsehole! And you! *points at Misa furiously* How dare you even think, for the slightest second, that YOU could ever make Light WANT you! How dare you try and take Light away from L! They are a mamtch made in heaven! You have no right to destroy the lovely couple!
I love it!:D Cant wait to read more! I wonder how things will work out! I really feel sorry for L. Having someone talk about him like a thing, acting or not; he's perfect! So cute! *huggles L as he eats cake* hehe XD
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! here, have an L and Light nandroid figure! *hands over figures* hehe, enjoy!
| TwoSightsOfJustice 3/21/08 . chapter 6
OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG! I GET A PEICE OF MATSU-TAN'S JACKET? *dies*
Omgosh, I hope Misa goes away . *Nyah Nyah's at her*
| ReidMorgan 3/18/08 . chapter 5
Very cute story, I really enjoy it.
| LightofaThousandSuns 3/16/08 . chapter 5
Phew! Doesn't look like their cover is blown yet! Liked how you ended the chapter too. And it's very sweet to know that L meant what he said! :) Great job, keep up the good work!