NO! The cause of Kira is not bigger than than any one person's love, especially if that one person's love is L!I will NOT let you hurt him Light! NEVER!*gets weapons ready*

*sniff* aww...please Light, think about it threw and threw! Rule the world of ungrtefully stupid humans while being miserable; or help save the world behind a letter being happy with the one you love! Look at L, can you imagine living without that bundle of cuteness next to you sharing yoru love?

I wonder..could i kill the one i love the most for a world? *thinks and tears up with a sad smile* no, never. That...the world would never be worth the murder of my love.

*looks at chain sadly as it sits on the floor* The chain of fate has broken, a love meant to be has been destroyed by a shinigami. Mother Fate is angry now, her creations slowly falling apart. Can it be restored?

Anyhow, love it! I cant wait to read what happens next!

PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!here *sniff* have an L and Light love plushie! *hands over plushie* :)

Ah poor L is going to die. That makes me sad. YOU MADE ME SAD! Gr, update soon.

aw... uber sad :(

;) can't wait to read ore it is good already and if u will will u please write bacl and tell me how to write fanfics? ty. it was a great story!

Kill her.

EERRGRG misa is stupid i would have just taken her deathnote and left her... L belongs with light so much better than misa does.

Why was this funny? Love the Poe refernce! That was Poe, right? It's and I'm sleepy, but if I'm wrong than I need to go shoot myself since I kind of fancy myself as a poetry buff.

Oh my god. When Matsuda came in on them, I was about to like, break my computer. xDD This is good. I like the vocabulary, and the dialogue. However, I think it could use a bit more description: what the dinner looks like, what it is, all that junk. I love this. :] Keep going!

misa is so stupid... no offense to people who like her!

ASOTA

And she just had to ask when they were going to kill him. So sad.

Ahh... A drunk Matsuda is not good. Heh heh.

I can't wait for the next chapter! -huggles-

Great!

Oni

Misa is deluding herself.

Misa's deluding herself scene:

Matsuda: You know Light is gay for L, that's why you should sleep with me. You know, because I'm not gay. And I'm not sleeping with L so... (Matsuda raises eyebrows and points to a broom closet)

Misa: Matsuda are you drunk?

Matsuda: No... maybe... Yes. But I still think you look hot.

Misa:... I think your lying.

Matsuda: No it's true! I left my jacket at their house and I saw them sucking some major face!

Misa's vision of horror:

L is leaning over Light menacingly and in the background the psycho theme is playing.

Misa: NO!

(Later that day)

Misa: I know you're sleeping with L!

Light: Why would I do that?

L: Yes, why would Light-kun do that?

Misa: Ryuzaki chained himself to Light-kun, of course Misa's Light-kun was molested!

L: 0_0

Light: She has a point.

L: 0_0

Light: Ryuzaki?...

L: I...am...not...a...pervert.

Light: 0_0

Woo that was fun to write. Anyways, is it just me or are Light and L kind of obsessed with... um... doing eachother. Seriously, as soon as everyone leaves L jumps Light. And Matsuda has a HUGE mouth, he gets drunk and he blabs to Misa of all people. Does that scream idiocy to you as it does to me.

I bet Misa will kill L herself if Light takes to long. (Imagine's Misa in the dead of night slicing L's throat)

That would be a horrible chapter! Anyways keep on writing.

lol, poor L. No sex. Poor Light also, has 2 put up with Misa.

STUPID ARSE MATSUADA! Damn you for getting drunk and telling Misa you freakin arsehole! And you! *points at Misa furiously* How dare you even think, for the slightest second, that YOU could ever make Light WANT you! How dare you try and take Light away from L! They are a mamtch made in heaven! You have no right to destroy the lovely couple!

I love it!:D Cant wait to read more! I wonder how things will work out! I really feel sorry for L. Having someone talk about him like a thing, acting or not; he's perfect! So cute! *huggles L as he eats cake* hehe XD

PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! here, have an L and Light nandroid figure! *hands over figures* hehe, enjoy!

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG! I GET A PEICE OF MATSU-TAN'S JACKET? *dies*

Omgosh, I hope Misa goes away . *Nyah Nyah's at her*

Very cute story, I really enjoy it.

Phew! Doesn't look like their cover is blown yet! Liked how you ended the chapter too. And it's very sweet to know that L meant what he said! :) Great job, keep up the good work!