Terrific, as always! I really enjoyed it.

Constructive Criticism:
I would have liked some more of the inner monologue, in addition to all of the dialogue from the film. Really beefing up the narration of what's going on inside Cloud's mind would support your interpretation more solidly.

All in all, well done, though. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to hearing more Aeris/Cloud fics from you :).

A little sadder at the finish than the actual end of AC, I thought, since where Cloud was already together enough to understand and smile, but a sweet, wistful little vignette all the same.

Love this! :3 i like how you used the different scenes! :3

and it has such a sad ending ;-;

It was a good story in itself, but, coupled with the dialog and actions of AC... I didn't like it. Maybe I just don't like AC. I dunno. The first parts were interesting, but then the AC scenes were introduced, and... yeah.

There are some grammar issues, but it's really insignificant here.

Overall, I'd say that the only real thing it suffers from is being drawn from Advent Children. The premise is very interesting; I would have liked to see more of Elmyra, but it was a well-written story anyway.

Good job.

This was really good. It flowed well between the past memories to the present.

Wow! Very nice!

Lovely. Tifa was a little OOC but that was okay. I loved the last line. It was sweet, and Aerith was in total character.
This Aerith liked it very much. ^-^
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