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| jevans47403 2008-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseAww Very cute, come to think of it; he's always her knight in shining armor, when he comes and rescues her from disastrous dates, even though she doesn't realize that he wants to be more than friends with her and that he's been right there in front of her the whole time. You've done a great job. LOL! You know this story kind of reminds me of the movie "Diary of a Mad Black Woman" where he says "I'm right here!" that was one of my favorite lines in that movie. |
| emommer 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* too romantic! now on to the sequel! |
| kransp 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story. It would be easier to read if it wasn't all underlined... though I know how much fun fighting with the formatting is here. |
| deal4321 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! I'm so glad that Derek came over to comfort her now if he would just tell her how he feels about her. Maybe next time. Thanks for sharing. :-) |
| TutorGirlml 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, you really did a great job with this one. I liked it a lot. You write Penelope so well, but in this one she was so sad and it just made me want to cry too. I loved how we were getting to hear Derek's thoughts, knowing that he really does love her and wants to be more than her best friend, but also respecting that it isn't the time and she won't accept him at his word yet. By the end though, I was smiling, knowing that sometime in the near future, he's planning to give her the best date she could ever imagine and that she won't end up alone as long as he has anything to say about it. Really really sweet and lovely. Thanks for sharing it! |
| nonhalema 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseWonderful work…nice view on Morgan |
| FeistyFeral 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseIf only all of us single girls had a guy like Derek in our lives. *deep sigh* This was a wonderfully written piece! I felt Penelope's saddness, anger, pain, dispair and loneliness along with Derek's admiration, compassion and love. “I sometimes wish Battle had just killed me.” she whispered. “At least the last thing I would have experienced would have been a nice date I really enjoyed – plus I wouldn’t have had to spend the rest of my life alone.”--This was the saddest line of the entire piece. It made me want to cry for Garcia! He would tell her all that as soon as she’d forgotten about that stupid date. Then he would ask her out and make it the best date she’d ever had, a never-to-be-forgotten evening with dinner, dancing and tons of fun – ending with being kissed like she’d never been kissed before. An evening where Derek would make sure Penelope would never worry about finding the right guy again.--YUM!! I can only imagine...ha ha ha! Great job! |
| bahjcb 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was adorable! I loved it! |