Just to point out that Fred's middle name is Gideon not Anthony. Anthony does not suit Fred to be honest. Anyway I loved the ending and that quote fits Fred much more than the earlier one. Good job)

Excellent!

Lols Aww's.

A good one shot.

Yes, that matches Fred much, much better :D*AK*

So cute :D

The second headstone was definatly more like Fred. I also like the "serious as a heart attack".

This was truly amazing. It was odd to see George kind of calm about the death because I can't see him being that way. You are right though, the last headstone is more Fred. I think you did a wonderful job.

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that was beautiful.

This is nice! I totally think the new quotes suit him better.

I like this... it is diferent so far...

it would be nice to see how they might have dealt with all of it...

anywho
you still rock!)

Aw, that's really nice. Very cute.

"serious as a heart attack" hahaha! i love that! great story fred's quote at the end really sounds like him!

Aw, how wonderful. It's a great story, wonderful. I have to agree that the first gravestone didn't sound like Fred at all. the second one was so much better...

Is this a one-shot?

If so, it was good anyways:)

That *does* sound much more like Fred. Very cute story.