i lol'd quite a bit XD
amazing. I'm gunna have to slink around your other works now :P

Oh man, this made me giggle at the end.

My only complaint is that the ending kind of lacks closure, but otherwise I love this so much, lmao - absolutely hilarious. XD

And out of curiosity, are you by any chance a Shannara fan? Your username would seem to suggest it. Just wondering, har.

This is hilarious! I wold love to now what happens next!

wow is edgeworth an idiot or something? very humorus. Please continue!

Maybe the story is a bit of a cliche, but if it's done often it's probably because it's a good one. Apart from a few typos here and there, this was so much fun! If you wanted to write more (like a prequel?) I wouldn't mind... ;)

Ahh, the old Phoenix/Edgey pairing, Poor Mia, if she hadn't gotten jacked then there would probably be more of that, bbut anywho, funny and charming even if it's mild Shonen-ai, Well done sticking to the characters