... This fic coulda fooled me the way it was written. I mean it was like some sort of the Allspark power brought Jazz back to life or something like that.

Good fic by the way.

C.D.

Well crafted storyline you have here. THis was another well done story. You seem to have a talent for these one shot, one character storylines.

Omg, that was really well written. I never would have picked him to be a ghost. But after i read the little paragraph at the end, i re-read the story and i picked up on all the little hints.

But i always get sad when Jazz dies cause he my favvy! So at the end i was a bit teary. Nice Work!

This was really well done.

It was slightly unsettleing from the start, a vague feeling of something about this is off, but it wasn't until Jazz reached the rec room and was looking around that I realised no one was reacting to his presense, but even then I didn't think ghost until Jazz got to the medbay at the end.

I really enjoyed this in a sad regretful sort of way.

that was so sad. poor jazz. good job. i liked this story.

the ending was sad, but it was a well written and enjoyable story. I enjoyed all the thought you put into it (and also enjoyed the explanation paragraph at the end since I was half asleep when I read it the first time...^^;) and I did notice that stuff the second time i read it.

I need a new box of tissues.
Poor Jazz...