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crisis
2009-11-08 . chapter 11
I love this fic, when are you going to continue it? Hopefully soon. I have read almost every your fic and i love to read more, they are best fics what i have read so far. Hopefully you continue soon them. I really love them.
Monmon-la
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Kagome is a bit out of character to be honest, she looks down on other people a lot in this fic
Blu inu
2009-09-05 . chapter 11
Great fic, Kagome fits into the story like she's always been a part of the series! Please write more!
LightDark18
2009-09-01 . chapter 11
have some of kagome's demon friends start comeing in, and also...UPDATE SOON i want to know what happens in the next chapter!
roxierockz21
2009-08-26 . chapter 11
please go on with this story!! i wanna kno what happens!
Wyrvvn
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
I came in expecting something amusing but ended up with a spiral of INCREDIBLE RAGE.

I dislike your fanfic and your mary sue Kagome. That is all. Not too bad at writing though.
MIDNIGHTPRINCESS96
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
PLEASE KEEP WRITHING IT'S AWESOME
Anony
2009-06-06 . chapter 11
Great story you have here! Though I can't say I'm comfortable with the Neuro/Kagome pairing (for I'm a Neuro/Yako fan), I can say that this is a excellent crossover story :D
Kuronueslover
2009-06-05 . chapter 11
hello!! its been awile!! pls update soon. i love all your stories!! theyre so well written!!
yorushihe
2009-05-06 . chapter 11
aah! very cool! Neuro` style xD I like him
also, your writing style is good! It is fluent and direct to the point... (descriptions are cool, but overly descriptional fics are tiring)

anyway.. you mentioned that inuyasha followed kikkyo to hell at the first chapter... so, no inuyasha this time even if you wanted... or if you wanted, you could ressurect him? (wink)

and I wanna fluffy scenes!
Neuro` sadistic and cruel, even so he seems to have honor... that could lead to something.

I was wondering, how about you create some chapters of your own plot? I mean, the story as a whole is from MTNN, just the add of the factor kagome changes it. So why don`t you make a chapter or a small arc of a plot entirelly yours?

Then you would be able to add fluffy scenes and do whatever you want to do with the pairings, since the circunstances would be controled by you.

It could be some festival, like one shrine festival at higurashi`s (since neuro was afected by miko`s garbs)... or some enemy that can anulate kagome`s power and renders her defence-less (making her the perfect distressed damsel.

Or even add a one-sided yako/neuro, making yako jelous of neuro`s preference for kagome. Or even using sasazak`s one sided traction as a factor of jelousy (neuro`s part)...

Just dunno much csause I`m new to the MTNN series... (just skirmed the first manga`s chapter), so is really up to you~!

bye!
Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami
2009-05-06 . chapter 11
This was good! I like how smart Kagome is. Yet she still keeps to her character, hating math. Neuro is really impressed with her. When is going to actually start Liking her? And when will Kagome like him? Is there some youkai courting customs? When will Kagome tell them about the spirits. I've never seen the series but I believe that Aya killed them by making them feel so depressed, with her songs, that they'll want to kill themselves. This story is going quite well! I like it! Please update again soon!
kakashixangela
2009-05-06 . chapter 11
this was great!! but i can't really imgine a picture of that poor cat!!

well please update CHU!! ^ ^ :)

and that stalker that aya has is sure to be a nut case if he isn't then i don't really know what he would be.
Evil RULZ
2009-05-06 . chapter 11
that was great :) please update soon i love this story :)
IceLilith
2009-05-05 . chapter 11
Nonetheless it was still informative as it set the foundation to for their upcoming case.
Ayjah
2009-05-05 . chapter 11
Quite the interesting case!
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