Aww, that was such a cute story ^^
I love how you made the 15-year-old versions of Pudding and Taruto, I thought they were very believable and true to their old personalities. I don't really have anything to say in terms of critism either.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

great story puddingxtaruto foreva. make more, make more.

love it

OMG! This'll be a short review basically saying... How freaking amazing this story was! So kawaii! I loved the ending part with Pai! So freaking helarious! Anyways, kawaii story! Bye bye!

ME: AWW!
SEREN: How KAWAII!
SEHO: Loved the story!
ME: You should really write more!

KeiichirosGirl427

Never. Had. Dohnuts.
*strange beeping sounds fill the room*
Does not compute!
*explodes*

Kawaii! So CUTE! TauPudding 4eva!

Love,
HinaAta

so kawaii!

I really like your story iut's so cute!
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*giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle**giggle* (tries to snatch a breath through the laughter) I... *giggle* can't... *giggle* breathe...*giggle* *giggle* *giggle* *giggle* lol XD

love it

*laugh* Ah! I loved this one! It's so cute! You could do one like this with another pair, but maybe not. *chuckle* When I first saw the title, I thought this story was going to be really sad. I'm glad it's not, though! Nice job! ^.^

holy crap i nearly melted with all the fluffiness and adorableness in this. so cute! i love it! love love love love love love love it! you could not have gotten me a better present!