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lana
2009-09-27 . chapter 12
FANTASTIC STORY...I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE. YOU ARE SO TALENTED. THE DRAMA, THE HUMOR, THE ROMANCE, EVERYTHING HARMONIZED PERFECTLY! BEST DASEY IVE EVER READ. AND ITS COMPLETE!
SusanMarieS
2009-09-20 . chapter 12
lol, love it. great story.
PeanutButterOreoCookieGirl
2009-09-19 . chapter 12
aw :) its adorable :P This story was amazing and though Dark!Derek is kind of scary he's perfectly loveable XD phycho :)
Crash Murphy
2009-09-13 . chapter 12
Excellent! I like that you...added depth to the plot. It went beyond romance, and I really appreciated that.
midnightwaters
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
This has got to be one of the best Dasey stories I've ever read...love it.
Babygurl4eva
2009-06-26 . chapter 12
I love how they argue like usual at the end! thats so them! Lol And that was kinda sappy but hillariouse! lol i loved every part of this story! I loved it so much!
Passionately Simple
2009-05-16 . chapter 12
So something insightful...I spent the better part of the three hours I was trying out alcohol flavoured ice cream for my friends birthday party thinking about it (the Limoncello was a no brainer) and this is what I came up with. I guess I did the whole thing backwards and read your newer work before your older work so maybe that was why I was so surprised by what I read. It was a lot less controlled and more dramatic then Reunion so I guess I can say you've progressed greatly as a writer. I did enjoy the plot, it was riveting from beginning to end and I appreciated how neurotic Casey was being--because I do enjoy the neurotic. I think the most interesting thing was how the relationship progressed from 'like' to 'love.' It was both indicative of a real relationship and one I could see Casey/Derek living out. Enjoyed reading every word.

A.
MeganJonas
2009-04-13 . chapter 12
I LOVE this story!
This is my second fav.
Great Job and keep up the good work with your other stories.
Sandalaris
2009-04-10 . chapter 12
Wow, just wow. This story is amazing. You keep them all so in character and usually I'm not into the whole "parents forbid it" sort of thing, but you did it so well. From start to finish this story is one of my all time favorites.
I'm warning you now, that since I believe you deserve more reviews I am going to review every chapter, even if all I type is a :) at least you'll get the reviews you deserve so feel free to ignore all other of my reviews because this is the one in which I will sing your praises. I've never reviewed all chapters for a story that I started reading after it was already finished, but again, I love this fanfic.
LornaxDanielle
2009-02-16 . chapter 12
Thats was lke awesome!
Great Job!
Fadetonoir
2008-11-18 . chapter 12
Aw/that was...sad...but happy in the end!
applepips.
2008-10-22 . chapter 12
I know this fic was put up some time ago but I just had to leave a review.

This fic was beyond amazing. And it was really intense! But I enjoyed every moment of reading it. Your version of Derek is so tortured. I mean reading about how he feels when Casey is not there is really heart wrenching.

And I also love your version of Casey, one moment she is all pissed with Derek and the next she's is all are you okay?(with refrence to the time he was injured)

And I also liked Sam's potrayal. He was comepltely the understanding friend and at least the one person Derek can confide in about his feelings for Casey. :)

Over all, this was brilliant!
Halle Alexis
2008-08-30 . chapter 12
i really like it
seatergirl71
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
Hey, I wanted to let you know that I have read your story before - I just didn't remember the name or that it was you who wrote it. Anyway, as soon as I started reading it tonight, I remembered that it is one of my favorites on here. You did a great job with it. Keep writing more stories! This site needs all the competent scribes it can get!
unoriginal-elizabeth
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Hm - I have to say, this story is good - very good. I love the big functionally-dysfunctional family dynamic the McDonald-Venturis have, so it was actually kind of painful to have to read Nora and George versus Casey and (especially) Derek. I think it was so hard to read because you set up Derek already feeling inferior/less trustworthy than Casey (something I can really see). But while obviously the reader knows 'better' than Nora and George, I do appreciate that they did have legitimate reasons for acting as they did (the thing with Beth, Derek's less than stellar history), and they weren't over the top bad guys.

I really did enjoy this, and you definitely kept me on the edge of my seat!
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