I like this. Short, simple, sweet, interesting. :) I especially like the end. :)

i really like your writing, you should keep it up.

it's nice to know there are some talented people out there and you are one of them. thanks for sharing this with me, and well with everyone here.

wow... This line: "Why would anyone/Go beyond the conformity/To reach their destiny?" just completely floors me... I literally have no words right now. That's superdeep.

A great poem fic. Very good.

Since you were so kind to check into my works, I thought I'd drop in to see what you're up to. And since I know nothing about Harry Potter, I stepped into this lovely poem. The line below caught my attention and (as all good lines do) stayed in my head so quite a while...

Why would anyone

Go beyond the conformity

To reach their destiny?

Why indeed. Human nature is a fickle thing. It may hide or it may push. Alice pushed and she grew as a person for the effort. Thanks for sharing this and I hope to see more like it!