I really like the 'strings of lanterns' comparison. Well done!

Amazingly written and I love the insight into Katara's and Aang's minds! Can't wait to read more!

ok, read through the next few now... nicely done. nicely done indeed. It's always a great thing to run into a genuiune teller of tales in this place. thank you.

Aww I like this one its very sweet

Bravo! An auspicious start. I liked it a lot. now onward to teh other chapters!