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HarleenQuinn
2008-04-17
ch 2,
abuseAnother great chapter! It flowed very nicely and was interesting from beginning to end. Update soon! :)

(P.S. Thanks for putting the link to my story on there, but it actually didn't work. :( Maybe you should try this link: /s/3685877/1/Waylon_Smithers_A_Life )
otherrealmwriter
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very interesting story. I like where you are able to take the charachters in The Simpsons and such. I honsetly see no reason why anyone would flame your writing, it's good.
HarleenQuinn
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuse*claps* That was a fantastic first chapter, Reverend! It was very well-written and -paced, and I really liked how you explored both sides of the coin: Tim's feeling of being betrayed and left behind by both Ned and Helen, and Helen's obviously warranted incredulity and disdain for Tim's behavior. It was all very expertly-executed, and I look forward to more! :)
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