Well I like this but where is the rest? I don't The plot is fully developed enough for you to stp there!! I also selfishly really want to know what happens on the double date.

Alice

That was really nice, I wish Charlie would find someone. I think he'll be really sad when Bella is gone. Keep up the good work! ;)

hehe this is heaps cute, im hopin there will b another chapter and we meet her, is she going to be nice? or will she be a vampire or werewolf or sumthin worse...? well i cant wait to find out hehe

This is a very good start to a story, but I'm just confused on who the characters are...

You should continue this story its really good!

I was just wondering if you were going to continue. It was very good and i hope that you do. Great Job

Ha! I love this story! Its very creative, and has yet to be done! Untill now! HAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN'T BELEVIE EDWARD SAID 'PAIN IN THE BUTT'. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHA!

i like it and i think you should keep going and make it longer