 Myst Pheonix 8/18/10 . chapter 3Please update!
I like the idea. I've never played Pokemon myself, but I like 'em. This is an interesting look at them.
PLEASE UPDATE! |
 Morbane 9/5/08 . chapter 3Seems a bit weird that the animated Vulpix would target someone in particular - but yay, I love fics with morphs in them. Interesting character background. If you shouldn't mess with foxes, why was she approaching it? Maybe she should have tried talking to it a bit first. Anyway. Bring on the doom. |
 Morbane 9/5/08 . chapter 2Neat premise. You might want to use a spell checker - 'prologue', 'grabbed', and 'figurine' are all spelled like so. Otherwise, this is definitely interesting. I'm having a hard (but funny) time figuring out what a tiny Vulpix using confusion on a bedside lamp would look like... but making it burn a hole through the drawer makes a lot more sense. |
 Doctor Professor Dai 3/31/08 . chapter 3I must say...quite interesting. For some reason, when that girl with the spiked collar was mentioned, Hanajima from Fruits Basket flashed into my head. I don't know why...
Anyway...lookin' forward to readin' more of this. |
 Damned Lolita 3/1/08 . chapter 2-whistles-
The girl with the spiked collar... will she make an appearance in the story? -shrugs- Just wondering.
Even the teachers, huh?
Peter Pan syndrome. And that's the end of my review! Great chapter! |
 Damned Lolita 3/1/08 . chapter 1Whoa! Can't wait to read this! Hurry and update, please! It looks really interesting! -nods-
Vulpix, huh? Cool. |