Reviews for Little Birds, Painted Wings

Reviews For: Little Birds, Painted Wings

Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-05-13 ch 5,	abuseNow I'm REALLY curious! What happend??! E! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I love this story! I must have MORE! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Red-Cherry-Flowers 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abuseHey, wow, this story is so interesting! I have never read another one like this...Helen/Eden is a very intriguing character and so different and I'm interested in how Tori is going to fit into the storyline too. And you've done the original characters like Dodger, Charley and Fagin well. Just to say, I love the 2005 movie and not many fics are based off it but this one is and I'm so, so happy about that! =) Hopefully you'll update soon, coz this story is starting to seem every good! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Arian the Shy 2008-03-24 ch 4,	abuseWaiting eagerly for a new chapter. I love your story, often wondered myself what would happen if a girl joined Fagin's Boys. Well I suppose I'll find out because I'm in the musical Oliver and Oliver, Dodger, and all but 3 of the pickpockets are girls. Of course, the ones with long hair will wear it under a hat, and I'll get mine cut shorter, but then I'm babbling. Runs off to practice pickpocketing on her brother
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-03-13 ch 4,	abuseOH! Great chapter! I love this story, it's so... intriguing, as I have said before! And Dodge! giggles What's a story without at least the mention of his stately personage?! Question: what are you basing this story on? Musical? Book? Movie? I don't know why it seems I always have to ask people this question. Just personal knowledge, I guess. Wonderful chapter! If you keep pumping these chapters out like you have, I'll be impressed (well, I already am impressed!)! Keep up the GREAT work!
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-03-11 ch 3,	abuseYes, intriguing! This story is filled with mysteries! I am so glad you updated (sorry it took me a while to get around to reading and reviewing!)! This story is just so fascinating! I never know what to think because I can't even guess what is going to happen next! Great chapter (yes, you are on a roll)! Please update soon!
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseVERY intriguing chapter! O! What is going to happen next?! I am so curious! Please update soon! I'm REALLY wanting to know what will happen next! UPDATE NOW!
Elaine Dawkins 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseI am soo excited to find out what happens next! Please post the next chapter! Pleasee! O.K. I got carried away with that one. Great story!
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseO! I'm curious! This is a very intriguing starting chapter! (And your summary caught my eye right away - I saw "Fagin" and had to read the rest!) I'm really at a loss for what exactly is going to go on in the story and VERY curious! Please update soon! I must know what's going to happen! A few gramatical and spelling errors throughout (not uncommon), but other than that, it is really good! Please write more!
Red-Cherry-Flowers 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseHmm, very fascinating, you have me hooked already! Please, please update soon! I have every curious to know what happens next to Eden. I especially liked how you opened the first chapter with “Eden Clarke wasn't the kind of child you fall in love with the moment you see her. She wasn't very attractive, or if she was she had a good way of hiding it.” I dunno what it is about it, but I really liked that opening and it got my attention straight away! Very well done! =)
Broken Amethyst 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseHello! Yes, I think this is a very nice story, and would love if you continued. Looking fowared to the next chapter. Cheero=D

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