OMG! That was awesome! I loved how everyone glared at Patrick, I laughed. That was cute.

That was cool. It was written like a play! However, I was expecting her to actually get married to Dusty.

Good Story!

I like this versiona bit btter than th other one its much cuter and theres no evil sea witch thingy lo

Great story! loved it.

Hey!! Sorry I didn't review earlier O_O I mean, I DID, but the site was being a meanie. Whatever!! So...it's a cute story! XD I liked the way it ended, although I think-just to be nice-Dusty could have like, met another girl or something. XD Wonderful job, though!!

Aw Sadness!! T~T I just saw a pic of Dusty on dA, 2. T_T I hope SB finds her soon. =3 Anyways cute FF =33

i love this! your a great writer

OMGness! I have to know what happens next. (dies) XD
-Meg

loved it. can't wait for the next chapter.