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| SpaceRoses 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseOh...great chapter. I am very interested now...and you make Jacob almost forgivable. How do you keep doing that? Making nasty characters almost likable? I like your Yoki too...he is very slimy but still interesting. Great chapter...and now I just want to wrap Shou up in a blanket and take him home with me! Great job on this chapter and I look forward to number three! |
| DemonRaily 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseKeep it going! |
| SpaceRoses 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseAw...thank you so much! I'm flattered...and this is such a good first chapter! I can't wait to see where it goes from here! Poor Shou...and his father is evil! Very evil! -sniffs and hugs Shou- Little Shou is so sweet...I love him to pieces. He reminds me of Nina and his make believe game!^^ So cute! Great job...plese write more soon! |