 venz07 2009-01-19 . chapter 7 I love it so mucho! |
 RykenBelmont 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Loved it. Never seen Wolf's Rain, but this made me wanna see it. :D |
 Aiko Takumi 2008-08-18 . chapter 7Your writing style is amazing. Reading this story was like watching a movie in my head-- a crossover of Wolf's Rain and Mai-Hime. Very, very well written.
Wolf's Rain has a very sad concept about the world, and I believe that you captured that in your story nicely. The battle scenes were written so vividly that I found myself almost "watching" the similar scenes from Wolf's Rain.
As for the characters, I think they are a tad OOC. But then again, as an AU fic, they weren't OOC enough to throw me off from the plot (which is fantastic by the way).
I don't know what to say exactly about the popularity of this fanfiction, nor do I believe it true. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it.
- A.T. |
 Ushiromae 2008-07-23 . chapter 7Wow. That was an adventure and a half. That was awesome. I am glad you finished this even though you didn't receive many reviews. I loved it. Great plot and inclusion of hints along the way. |
 helleboros 2008-07-11 . chapter 5It's a bit scattered, I'm afraid. There are some nice concepts here, but it's like there are so many ideas competing to get expressed in this fic that there just isn't enough room for any one of them to get a good showing. It feels like the story is just flitting from scene to scene without pausing long enough for any real depth to develop.
I'm also a bit conflicted by the characterisation. Nao hailing Natsuki as her princess. Shizuru saying that she doesn't have the strength to lead. Mikoto as a spoilt brat. Yukino whaling on Reito for thinking that Haruka was callous. Mai, Midori, Haruka, etc.. They're all just a little too off for me, so I'm finding it hard to really get into the flow of the story.
That's probably just me, though. I know this story is AU, but I read fanfic because I enjoyed the canon characters enough that I want more of them than I can get just by watching the series. It kinda defeats the purpose of reading fanfic if the characters don't actually act like the characters I wanted to get more of :).
Anyway, this is just my opinion, of course :). It's still quite a nice idea, just not quite my thing, I guess. |
 Shazu 2008-06-25 . chapter 7this was a pretty interesting story, though there were some points that could've been made clearer, *scratches chin* but thank you for writing this =D it kept me entertained till the end X3 i like how you used your imagination to create a fantasy world where they are all gods and they are being hunted by the humans, it is a really good concept, conspiracy theories are alway around x]
but yeah, *zips mouth shut* thank you for writing this! X3 i really enjoyed reading it. |
 nolens volens 2008-06-11 . chapter 7omfg! that was awsome! it was badass! there where some great battle scenes! the ending was great! thanks! |
 Shinata-Riyoko 2008-06-10 . chapter 7This was amazing. The storyline, the writing style ... Just amazing, it was very unique and wel lthought out, the ending was great xD Hope we can read more of your works soon.
~Riyoko~ |
 chum-sa 2008-06-10 . chapter 7Complete? Really?
Anyway,i hope that to see u again in next story! |
 RevalisPyross 2008-06-09 . chapter 7WOW! That was awesome! The mixture of action and romance was just right and I love your writing style. |
 ALEXISSA2 2008-06-08 . chapter 7WOW!! That was an awesome ending!! FIrst, I thought it would be a tragic ending but it wasn't so I'm happy they're back together. And I really enjoy reading this fic.
Thanks for sharing and looking forward to your new story, PPMS!! |
 Heart-san's wolf 2008-06-08 . chapter 7This story is so awsome!I'm sad to see it end though*crys*Great job! |
 mrerice 2008-05-31 . chapter 6I always look forward to your updates, though I sometimes am unable to read them immediately. I can't believe that this may be the second to the last chapter! Gah! I have to say that I really enjoy your writing, the visual descriptions you use allow me to easily visualize the scenes, especially the fights. XD Though the next chapter may be the last, I will look forward to it anyway. I can't wait to see Reito get his in the end. |
 nolens volens 2008-05-25 . chapter 6omg! this was mf badass! great! loved the fighting scenes! awsome! thanks! |
 ALEXISSA2 2008-05-22 . chapter 6Woah Midori is on their side now but can they trust her?? It might be a trap. I'm eager to read your mass of fight scenes so please post soon. |