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Peter Kim
2009-11-26 . chapter 60
I suspect that Augustine is a member of the Aing-Tii race,the Rakata race or the orginal sith race since all three of those races have greatly mastered the Force. Augustine could be other races that is even more ancient then Aing Tii,Rakata or the orginal sith race like the Celestials,Grees, Kalaris, Old Ones, Kathols, Lomabuans, etc. Augustine could be an Alashan since they lived near a time well so one of that race could have mastered the abilty over time itself. Augustine could be a member of the Kwa who learn to master time using the infinity Gate or so.
tanith-4486
2009-11-25 . chapter 60
nice
Anjirika
2009-11-24 . chapter 60
Wow. The last two chapters were amazing. Absolutely breathaking amazing.
Me
2009-11-24 . chapter 60
This is a very VERY awesome story. not many can pull off timetravle stories but you sure can :) i like the way that you managed to tell anakin and padme about jania being thier grandchild and from the furture without being affully cheesy or akward KEEP IT UP>
HevnoAngered
2009-11-23 . chapter 60
Wow. This was a very significant chapter. I'm sure her desperation for a resolution will be even greater now. I can see her yelling at Anakin to get stronger quicker. To get prepared and cast away all doubt soon so that he can be prepared for Sidious. She's already had visions and nothing has changed from them.

This chapter completely changed my view on the Bail situation. Sure it was kind of cold for the Jedi to practically ignore Bail's wife because they were chasing phantoms across the galaxy and only ever looking after each other. But at this rate that's exactly how it is suppose to be. Sorry Bail but you're going to have to take care of things yourself. Right now stopping Palpatine himself, not his empire is TOP priority.

I cannot stress that enough. A rebellion has been formed and its not holding a candle to Palpatines empire even with Anakin Senior, Luke and Leia all as Jedis. Jaina, it's up to you. Right now you are the one who needs to be the hope of the galaxy because not even the chosen one can do it alone!!

Epic chapter.
ILDV
2009-11-23 . chapter 60
gOOD.
Jedi Angel001
2009-11-23 . chapter 60
WOW that was amazing!
du1387
2009-11-22 . chapter 60
oh wow. I didn't expect that. At least Jaina is cured now. Hopefully this means that she can go and affect the future for the better now.

Glad to see an update! Hope to see another one soon!
ilovenat1995
2009-11-22 . chapter 60
WOW that was really intense.
Unsharpened
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
Awesome chapter! Update soon!
phantom-jedi1
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
The plot continues to thicken! Who (or what) is Augustine? Is he another Sith Lord or something else entirely? How can Jaina save the future?

So many questions, so many threads...I love it! Keep up the amazing work: I'm just as confused as Jaina and as determined to unravel the mystery.

Phantom Jedi
whateveritis12
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
I know that people have said it before, but now you've confirmed that Augustine is Plagieus.

Good chapter, nice job with getting Jaina cured of Delik. I'm looking forward to seeing how she ends up changing the future (again).

One thing though, Teneniel (Tenel Ka's mom) is younger than Luke and Leia by a few years. Now if theirs a reason you put her in, just ignore this, but it's just something I'm pointing out.
general-joseph-dickson
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
So. Now that Jaina is cured I wonder what will happen.
Lanta
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
That was an interesting and gripping chapter. Maybe a bit too convenient in curing Jaina, but, well, any storyline you came up with to cure her would be. I particularly enjoyed the scene with scenes with Augustine; viewing the future etc. I'm now really eager for the next chapter; any idea how long it'll be? I also find myself wondering whether Jaina's Force abilities have gone back to normal or are still heightened.

Thanks for writing!
XxRandom NemesisxX
2009-11-21 . chapter 60
Wow. MORE!
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