 kitcat19us 2009-05-04 . chapter 1It's really sad story,but a good story also!! |
 Jopot 2008-11-11 . chapter 1You are a very talented writer to keep me rivetted to your story. And I could lamost shed a tear for what might have been, for regrets and what's gone. Thanks for such a moving piece of writing. |
 gudbooks 2008-07-19 . chapter 1That was fantastic. I loved the little breaks with bits of the song (I think) in them.
Even though it was very nearly a slash (which i despise by the way), it was really good. I love the way you described everything and how snape actually had some respect for harry... and the way you did the night dumbledore died... that was brilliant. You really got how snape would feel and i loved the way u described the despair...
A very good one shot. |
 SeverusPotterSnape 2008-06-09 . chapter 1so sad... i really do hate that part in the seventh book. argh. Once kind, one of my favorite characters dies. It always has to be my favorite character in series that dies! It gets me so frustrated when that happens! But yea, it was sad, yet good. |
 chrisvel 2008-03-02 . chapter 1Brilliant, really!
It is incredibly well written and so full of emotions. You wrote a wonderful piece here and even with the knowledge that it ends with Snape's death I couldn't help but wish for a miracle at the end.
You made me cry a little.
Please write more Snarry, I'd love to read more! |
 DebsTheSlytherinSnapefan 2008-03-01 . chapter 1The emotions you managed to put into that was amazing to say the least. Well done its just a shame you didnt have Severus survive, or something happen it was a one shot after all...im glad i read it it was emotioanlly and brilliant written well done...i would love for you to have made it a back in time story or a story where Falwks came!! that would have been amazing! he was loyal to Dumbledore afterall i still dont understand why the bird didnt come...he came for harry! |
 Kyla Mizuki 2008-03-01 . chapter 1Aw!! That was fantastic! ^_^ I loved it, it almost made me cry... The writing really captured some awesome emotion, and I love how Harry finally understands, but it's still sad cause up to the end I was wishing that Snape would come out all right, even though I knew he wouldn't, and then he dies and Harry thanks him.. just... wow, lol, great job! |
 meow-fairy 2008-03-01 . chapter 1 Made me Cry.
Loved it.
Will be looking forward to more like this.
;D |
 ???? 2008-03-01 . chapter 1 ...Amazing just amazing...This was incredable. 5 starts! |
 Silversaz 2008-03-01 . chapter 1Why? WHY? why do people ignore amazing oneshots like this! its absolutely brilliant! the pensive of emotions is a great idea and makes me wish that i had ** up with the idea. but 4 once, i dont need 2 wish that, because uve made this oneshot so good i dont think you can improve it. maybe just have one bit of speech (eg the bit at the end thank u sir. for everything.)? but im not complaining. its excellent and u hav done a good job. well done.
keep writing,
saz |