I love it so far! Very hot! ^-^

*sigh and shakes head* Poor, confused Byakuya. Can't even tell that he really wants Ichigo. That's so like him actually, you've got their characters down pat. I can't wait for more of this!

There's nothing bad I can say, and I can't offer any advice. I can however let you know that I love this story. I can't wait to read more of it! I love how Byakuya doesn't realize that he's falling for Ichigo, or at least, that's what I'm getting out of it, and hopefully I'm getting the right idea. Whether I am or not, I eagerly await the next chapter.

Sincerely, Tobi.

hey nice story... are u going to update it soon?

Thankyou so much for awesome story ^^ look foward for next chapter, ganbatte!

love the story! <3

what was he going to do? lol, my guess would be ** him... Hum, next time Ichigo gets Byakuya angry (likely to happen, totally, please? lol), he could spank him... hot. heh.

i hope theres a next chapter^^!

very very hot!

I really enjoyed this, and I wish you would continue it, I was disappointed when I checked the date and saw that you haven't updated in a long time. Please continue with the story!

One word, YUM. I like how you've written Byakuya's intense/cold nature, especially towards Ichigo. And I share Byakuya's fantasy on having Ichigo practically prostrate before him ;)
I have a feeling though that both Ichigo and Byakuya both don't know what they're in for! Hope you continue with this awesome fic.

Very good so far. Ichigo is a totally sexy Uke-virgin...and Byakuya is...well...Byakuya. Keep up the good work, I hope to see an update in the near future.

Ah, I love your story! I wonder what Bya is planning? XD Hmm? He better not hurt Ichigo! hehe.

LOL. That's Byakuya for you... xD Good story so far, though! :D

^_^ Hehe, I liked that. Actually, I've likedit so far, hmm, can barely wait for the next update, still no pressure meant.
Good Job.
//DSP