Reviews for A Ghost's Long Journey to the Afterlife

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Angel Terra 2008-10-05 ch 19,	abuseWow xD I just found this by accident and after reading the first chapter, the next thing I knew I was reading all of the chapters. Amazing story! I really like where this is going. I have noticed how you have improved as the chapters progress, making the plot line the more interesting with every chapter. Yami is so cute. I love him when he's all protective over Yugi, like with the bully. I think that the Yugi being sick has been overused, though. Seeing him healthy (or giving him a proper reason to be like that) would be nice in a while. I'm also interested. Why is Yugi living with this 'Uncle', rather than his grandpa? I know this is an alternate universe, but I'm just curious. I've also noticed the lack of Tristan, Joey and Seto. Not that I mind. The main reason I started reading this was because of the whole Yami and Yugi revolving story. Anyway, so far love it. I hope I can read more of this soon. Keep it up!
Sunrise Phoenix 2008-10-02 ch 19,	abuseReally good. But why do I get the feeling that the storm's on it's way? Anyway, keep going!
Chibi Chib 2008-10-01 ch 19,	abuseAw Yami's adorable :3
coymelody 2008-09-27 ch 19,	abuseGreat Chappie! Please Update! SON!
The Danvers Girls 2008-09-27 ch 19,	abuseI SEE UPDATE! -cheers and stops demonstrating outside your window- Nice to have you back, nakama! -wink- And it means friend/buddy, hehe. I picked it up from DragonDancer5150, who uses it in half her fanfics - if Yami called Yugi aibou, then Yugi calls Yami nakama! ^^ Cute, neh? Anyways... I sense foreshadowing. >< Yugi's dreams mean something bad... Lemme find out what soon! :P -Sammi
blackdemondragon 2008-09-26 ch 19,	abuseWoho! New chapter, and a great one at that! I love all these cute little moments with Yugi and Yami. I'm really not a puzzleshipping fan, but seeing this brotherly fluff just makes me wanna scream, "Kawaii!" Loved it, and I'm definitely looking forward to an update! As always, Keep. It. Up. Yay! =^_^=
Bored2Deth 2008-09-26 ch 19,	abuseso you finaly decided to show up again huh? dint worry im joking, anyways, i can sort of understand whats going on with yugi, the same thing happened to me strangely, but thats besides the point. yami seems nicer then he was, so thats a plus. anyways, its great as always, please update when you can. B2D
blackdemondragon 2008-09-13 ch 18,	abusePoor Yugi... Although, introducing the internet to someone who doesn't know how to avoid inapropriate sites is not a good idea. No one told Yugi that though. ^^ This should be interesting to say in the least. In any case, I love this story and am looking forward to the rest. Update soon, please. =^_^=
Viron 2008-08-24 ch 1,	abuseI noticed a lot of 'He then's and 'He soon's. Like it, Keep it going.
sliders245 2008-08-12 ch 18,	abuselove chapter! keep update!
XLight ForeverX 2008-06-30 ch 18,	abuseI love how often you update. You even inspire me to write. Now, I am wondering if this person in Yugi's dream is Yami? Perhaps I am wrong, don't clue me in. You're the author...therefore you decide. You write very elegantly. The way you protray Yami is pretty amazing. Keep up the hard work.
Bored2Deth 2008-06-28 ch 18,	abuselol yes he has much to teach poor yami. great as always and im sorry i didnt review last chapter. my computer was dead
Yami Val 2008-06-25 ch 18,	abusePast 3 chapters were awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!!
Yugisrose 2008-06-24 ch 18,	abuseOh plz keep going! Funny thing is, Yugi didn't tell Yami WHAT it is he was dreaming about. Great job!
Sunrise Phoenix 2008-06-24 ch 18,	abuseGettin' good girl! But as I said before,"...I sense some stormy weather ahead." And Yugi's nightmare...I think it's a vision from the past. It could be Yami's father that those terrible eyes belong too; it has to be. If not, than who? As for Yami himself, you think his father killed him? If so, then things are going to get a whole lot worse. May the lord be with you, -Sunrise Pheonix

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