Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Beyond the Mask of Darkness - Page 1 of 9
Hollow-Frost
2010-01-03 . chapter 11
I have a question: I thought that Drac couldn't be seen by women. But it seems to me that Margaret can see him just fine, and it doesn't seem to have any bad effect on Drac. Did I miss something?
The Brat Princess
2010-01-03 . chapter 11
I felt a smidgen of sympathy for Margaret in this until of course she let Antonio murder her father. And she smiled! That girl is bad. Hope she gets whats coming to her!

^Two lovely puppets, one for each hand^ so in character for him. Well done. Oh and for some strange reason I find the image of him playing snooker hilarious. My mind is a strange place indeed.

I look forward to the next update!

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

I'm dying with suspense, not knowing who or what those creatures were at the beginning...

Maeve OWNED that English girl. That was so funny. She was such a bitch. It was totally uncalled for to destroy her breakfast! That was really entertaining. Throughout the whole thing I kept muttering "Oh burn!" to myself. Maybe Dracula will make them wrestle for his own amusement.jk

And the Dark Cloud of Seduction and Darkness shows himself again(well, figuratively at least). I KNEW he was Sir Roarke! Yes, I was right *victory air grab*.

I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops.

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-03 . chapter 9
I really loved this chapter and yes, the nightmare was really unsettling. Obviously it wasn't terrifying, but that wasn't your intention. It definitely showed that Maeve is in a rut and trapped in her own life. The student Seamus was funny and cute! My bro's name is Seamus...I better watch my back I don't want to get an apple core chucked at me!

I love Brian! For an old man he is simply awesome! At least he is concerned about her safety. The tender moment with Maeve and her mother wasn't too sentimental. Kudos for pulling that off.

I think I have a better idea of where Maeve is going than she does...lol

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-03 . chapter 8
I liked this chapter as it was longer than the last. Congrats on writing another great chapter without the Giant Bat. You could have easily crumbled without his presence to fall back on but I'm delighted to say you're doing spectacularly!

"What is next for you I wonder, Antonio, polishing his boots and sewing his shirts? Or perhaps fixing his hair…” LOL! Dracula would be so insulted if one of his minions suggested he needed help with his dark locks!hehe

Really liked the conversation between Maeve and Antonio and how she reminds him of his sister. Sweet.

Away! Chapter 8 awaits!

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-02 . chapter 7
Don't be so hard on yourself, this chapter was good! You can't have Dracula in every chapter and you managed to write a great one wihout his presence.

Loved how awkward and anti-social Maeve was and my heart bled for her when she was left alone at the dance while Meredith got lots of action...cailín bocht.=(

Brian is amazing. Loved Maeve's reaction to his mad seduction skills. I bet he could even teach Dracula a thing or two! She was all 'Ew...old people flirting! Icky!'

A voice she doesn't recognise? Oh dear, I must read on before the suspense kills me!

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-02 . chapter 6
This chapter was epic too(although of course I knew it would be!)

God, Conn is such a waste of space! Dracula should have the word 'useless'branded on his forehead.

The fae were awesome! A new game has been created- Point and Laugh at the Impotent Vampire! Ha, they're so funny.

^“What? It isn’t my fault if the undead king of the stiffs is just that – a stiff! If he cannot handle a few insults - ”^
He may be a stiff but he'shaving trouble getting stiff! Haha...sorry about that. Can't resist a good pun.

Oh Dracula, he has a new plan up his sleeve. Watch out Maeve!

Loved it!

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2010-01-02 . chapter 5
Hello darling! I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed in so long! Truth be told, this story had slipped my mind but once I saw you had updated my interest was sparked once again. Now, on to the review!

^“In the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Ghost. Amen.”^ We still say 'ghost' FYI. Gawd I'm such a culture obsessed freak!

Maybe it's because the Irish language is dying out but I just LOVE reading the odd word or phrase here and there. It's so weird(in a good way) seeing the heritage and language described so well in a fanfic. Not that I would flame you if you got things wrong!

I lurve Dracula in this chapter. His wit was so dry and I had a little flashback to the movie when he said 'don't be boring!'. God, I love that line! I love Richard Roxburgh's drawl full stop!

Maeve is so vulnerable yet brave at the same time and that's really endearing. Girl power!

^“You are alone, my pretty Irish pet.”^ I like that line. Not because I'm Irish and can imagine said Count saying that to me or anything ridiculous like that. Stop looking at me that way!This fanfic isn't helping me conjure up fantasies...I'll shut up now.

Maeve is so awesome. She's so fiery and defiant.

^“I fear no fairy!^ LOL! That had me ROFLMAO cos I instinctively pictured Edward. All the Twilight bashing is going to my head.=p Love where your going with the story and I'm delighted that I rediscovered it after all this time.

Brat~
Valentine M.
2010-01-01 . chapter 11
Nice chapter, i enjoyed hearing Margaret's story.
Can't wait to read more.
~valentine
SpeedDemon315
2009-12-30 . chapter 11
Ah, I was wondering when the next chapter would come and alas, here it is!

I'm liking Antonio more and more and Margaret sounds like an equally intriguing character as well. For some reason, I'm getting a pairing vibe from those two...they just seem like they would be good for each other. But that's just me. ;)

I love all the historical or mythological referances you put into this, reminds of some of the Irish myths and legends I once read. For a moment, I thought you spelled 'Isolade' wrong but maybe that's another way to spell it, I suppose.

Keep up the great work! I love what I'm reading!

~~SpeedDemon315
The Brat Princess
2009-09-28 . chapter 4
Loved this chapter! Conn almost paid heavily for his insolence. He so got owned! Dracula always has the last word.

Loving the little bits of Irish thrown in here and there. 'An Gorta Mor'. A sad time for the country indeed!=(

Can't wait for Maeve and Dracula to meet up again!

Brat~
The Brat Princess
2009-09-28 . chapter 3
Hello dear! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long- school and all that. Anywho onto the review!

The plot is progressing nicely. I loved the imagery of the moon and the stars at the beginning. I'm a sucker for well written description!

Ah, the villian and the heroine come face to face...well almost anyway. Maeve has incurred the wrath of Count Chocula? Oh no!I'm sure she'll warm his dead heart soon enough...

Great chappie!

Brat~
Mutpadarra
2009-08-30 . chapter 10
I absolutley love this fic, the best one ive read, im so surprissed you havent gotten more reviews, i think you deserve much better. I cant wait to see maeve's face when she see's Felim, please update soon. I really enjoyed the conversation between her and Dracula, very well done.

Keep up the excellent work.
cartoongal11
2009-08-21 . chapter 10
Could you do more please?
You never know what can happen unless you keep on working.
Please and thank you. :)
Anon.
2009-08-20 . chapter 10
It is a very good chapter. I would like to see more Maeve and Dracula interaction. Also, I would like to see Dracula put that English bitch in her place. I can't wait for when Felim shows up. I like this chapter's developements, and I don't mind that I was 99% sure that Maeve would move in with Dracula. I like this story very much; I can't wait for your next update.
Return to Top