These are pretty damn awesome. Great work on this. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep at it.

Really cool =D I luv these two together ^^ update as soon as you get the chance!

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EPIC.

HEART.

ZOMG.

SEXY.

WINBUCKETS.

As always.

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I feel awful not finding this earlier. Dx
Xiaorang happens to be one of my favorite pairings~!

This drabble is just really cute. :]

LOL JAEJOONG IS MY CRUSH TOO. Honestly.
Hwoarang must feel a bit of competition, lmao.

Anyways, this chapter is nice,it's like trying to make himself not fall for Xiao.. but hey opposites attract.

I read this on my phone in my warm bed this morning (stupid evil cold Australian weather D:). Four key things popped up whilst doing so:

- My fave author updated, thus resulting in a spaz
- I had a big fangirl that it was about Monochrome, and not only that, around my FAVOURITE chapter (10 and 11 FTW!)
- T3H CUTENESS!
- OMFG. HERO JAEJOONG. DBSK IS LOVE. SO IS HERO. I DID NOT KNOW YOU KNEW OF/LIKED DBSK. HERO IS WIN. Xiah is made of more win, BUT HERO IS STILL WIN. FOUR MILLION PEOPLE CAN'T BE WRONG FROM THAT POLL XDXDXDXDXD

Erm. Yes. GREAT to see that you updated :3 I really enjoyed this one because we get to see things from HWOARANG'S POV, because Monochrome was strictly from Xiao's. And ya know. It was extremely refreshing. Thanks for writing this, it really brightened my otherwise gloomy month :3

Have a great one, looking forward to your updates, and glad you had fun on your holiday!

Oh he's a sneaky little bugger isn't he? I really like the way you write this pair. She normally kind of annoys me with the little girl persona but you do a really good job of taking both of them a little deeper and giving them some real personality.

Great job and looking forward to updates on this and "Never Ever" :-)

Awesome ^^ hope you update whenever you get the chance~!! All of the stories are great!

Well,that was a slap in the face for Jin lol.

I really liked this chapter, they're all in character ^^

oh i especially adore this chapter!! especially because they're all acting so IN CHARACTER and BELIEVABLE to boot. now i'll just sit back and eagerly await the next chapter of Never Ever :) :)

MADAME BATOLLI WITH AN UPDATE! Just what I need to cheer me up.

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Clever that you compared a sport to another sport :D

'No, the game wasn’t over. It had just been 0 - 15 in Jin Kazama’s favour. And, judging by how Xiaoyu’s face reddened over that one small comment, it was now fifteen all.' - -snickersnickersnicker-

'Her suggestion that her own room was closer had been a welcome surprise, and the slow but smooth progression from harmless joking and flirting to kissing to undressing to pressing her to the bed and sliding inside her, her face buried in his shoulder, legs wound around him, was even more welcome. She gave soft sighs of pleasure as he trailed his lips down her throat and over her chest, and when he kissed her she moaned into his mouth.' - ...:D :D :D :D :D :D D: :D -evil perverted grin-. XD I love your little descriptions like this, honestly. They make me go ":3"

OMG THE END! XD!

I love you man, you made my fucking day XDXDXDXD

-reads it again-

I've been away from FF so long, I forgot the stories I've favorited, and this little update on yours makes me miss it quite a bit. ;~; Nothing like a good XiaoRang...or whatever it's called.

Kind of a little thing, but I do like how you contrasted their typing styles; Xiaoyu actually caring a bit and Hwoarang not capitalizing or anything. Do continue? :]

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yes! update!

Oh gods, yes this! the verbal (not really) exchange between the two is hilarious and lol at the 'my devoted fanclub.' Really enjoyed this. :)

-pimp smacks FFN- LET ME LOG IN D:

Anyway. You're very welcome, I'm glad I could help.

And again. I love your Hwoarang X] And your Xiao. But rofl, daydreaming about your dick XDXDXDXDXD Ah. You're awesome :3 The last comment... XD!!

Good luck with the "Never Ever" update :)