hahahahhahahahahahahaha the skirt tucked into the knickers thing made me laugh out loud XD poor xiao

OOOOO, OWNED JIN!

what a bitch! i LOW hwoarang in the tennis chapter!

I hate Xiaoyu. And I don't want her to paired to ANYONE in the Tekken roster

But the way you write...all I can say is that you are impressive. I finally saw her with depth.

I can say that this is a lovely story even though it contains the character I despise.

Well done.

First of all, I love these stories. She annoys the heck out of me most of the time but you manage to make her seem human and easy to put up with so congrats to you. Secondly I freely admit that even as a grown up he makes me giggle. I think he reminds me of the boys I sometimes crushed on as a teenager. You also manage to take his shallow persona and give it some depth and humanity which makes his game persona much nicer as well. So again congrats.

My first thought apon reading this is that if the teacher in your story did that at the school I teach at trouble would not BEGIN to describe the reaction against them. Secondly I've done the whole skirt in your knickers thing (thanklyfully my skirt was longer and so everything essential was still covered) and she handled it way better than I did.

Still a lovely little story about two unlikely people that together you've made me like as a potential couple. Thanks for that :)

And then they made out and had bike-sex. The end.

(not really but LESS THAN THREE!)

Aww how slightly depressing. Yes Alisa most definetly should just jump in the river. Her and all those other odd undeveloped new characters

You should do these more often they're very nice.

You know, I was literally only looking at this yesterday. XD

'...shudders as dusk creeps in around them, wishing the world was still the same.' - Beautiful.

BUT XIAOYU SHOULD NOT BE THINKING OF OTHER MEN WHEN BEING FUCKED BY HWOARANG. NAUGHTY XIAOYU.

OMFG BATOLLI UPDATES X3 And OwO dedicated to me wtf... -read-

'she had to admit it hadn't looked all that bad on him.' - I think I know where the rest of this is going XDXDXD

AND THERE IT IS! THE RED THONG XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

RED-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D-D THO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-ONG! XDXDXDXD

Thank you! I'm gonna have to pay you back now when I get back from my other grandparent's house! Merry Christmas, I hope you and Adam don't freeze too badly in the English snow! XD

I love short stories, and yours were absolutely brilliant! I'm looking forward to reading more of your material :)

These are pretty damn awesome. Great work on this. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep at it.

Really cool D I luv these two together update as soon as you get the chance!

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EPIC.

HEART.

ZOMG.

SEXY.

WINBUCKETS.

As always.

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I feel awful not finding this earlier. Dx

Xiaorang happens to be one of my favorite pairings!

This drabble is just really cute. :]

LOL JAEJOONG IS MY CRUSH TOO. Honestly.

Hwoarang must feel a bit of competition, lmao.

Anyways, this chapter is nice,it's like trying to make himself not fall for Xiao.. but hey opposites attract.

I read this on my phone in my warm bed this morning (stupid evil cold Australian weather D:). Four key things popped up whilst doing so:

- My fave author updated, thus resulting in a spaz

- I had a big fangirl that it was about Monochrome, and not only that, around my FAVOURITE chapter (10 and 11 FTW!)

- T3H CUTENESS!

- OMFG. HERO JAEJOONG. DBSK IS LOVE. SO IS HERO. I DID NOT KNOW YOU KNEW OF/LIKED DBSK. HERO IS WIN. Xiah is made of more win, BUT HERO IS STILL WIN. FOUR MILLION PEOPLE CAN'T BE WRONG FROM THAT POLL XDXDXDXDXD

Erm. Yes. GREAT to see that you updated :3 I really enjoyed this one because we get to see things from HWOARANG'S POV, because Monochrome was strictly from Xiao's. And ya know. It was extremely refreshing. Thanks for writing this, it really brightened my otherwise gloomy month :3

Have a great one, looking forward to your updates, and glad you had fun on your holiday!