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crackerbox9
2009-10-04 . chapter 2
technically her name is Ku-Fei, her name doesn't follow traditional Japanese of stating family name then personal name.

Then again i think Ku-Fei is her first name
ryuou
2009-07-24 . chapter 2
I like the plot idea and the story so far, but as this hasn't been updated in a while so I don't know if this story is going to continue or not. I hope it does.
Jaysen
2008-12-26 . chapter 2
Unique. You chose the Wilhelm Arc to introduce him. Also, clever idea on using the similar family names and similarities such as the fact that Ku just may be a Amazon. Keep up the good work.
Dreamingfox
2008-11-30 . chapter 2
Interesting...
Ever plan to follow up?
wiseman
2008-11-24 . chapter 2
My vote is for setsuna in this good story so far. I honsetly would haved love to see yue with ranma but if you want a curveball pairing of sorts how habout ranma with nodaka miyaski based on his aura being confidence and nodaka absorbs it another reason being ranma is as mature as negi but easier to talk because he gets along well with his sister and yue
TJ Rice
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
This is kinda cool. First Ranma/Negima fic I've ever seen. Love Ranma 1/2 and I'm a big fan of Negima. I'd like to see Keade win. She's so cool. Along with Fei-ku. Those two should win. For sure.
masaki yang yi1
2008-09-24 . chapter 2
I like it,would you keep writting more and it's too early to settle on pairing Ranma up with anyone.
Darthvader2209
2008-09-18 . chapter 2
Chao has to go back to the future, but other than that maybe and I stress MAYBE Ku-fei or Mana. Asuna I can kinda see, same with Setsuna. Kaede has more chance than Asuna, Setsuna, and Yue. Yue is just too concentrated on Negi to want to be with Ranma or anyone else. Sorry.

Later,

Vader
ranma hibiki
2008-06-25 . chapter 2
yep, just like every other girl and or sibling that meets the tradition of "glomp ranma an squeeze him till he cant breath any more" ^__^ always fun
KitsuneOverlord
2008-06-22 . chapter 2
Fairly good chapter. While the quality of the text itself isn't the best I've ever seen, the plot/storyline itself appears to be quite solid. And about Fei-Ku... I have all the manga chapters up to, what, 180 or something, and they ALWAYS refer to her as Ku Fei.

You've added more girls to vote on? Does this mean I can change my mind and vote on others? Or are you perhaps going for the 'harem' angle? I wouldn't mind. Both Ranma and Negima are almost harem in canon either way.

Vote: Ku Fei/Lingshen Chao (To be completely honest, I'd the happiest if Ranma had several girls, namely, Ku Fei, Chao, Mana, Kaede and Setsuna. Ku Fei and/or Chao, however, would be the best.)

Perhaps you can have Ranma become interested in magic, because I really think Ranma would JUMP on the chance to learn those cool combat spells. If he's a mage, then he could form Pactio contracts with those girls I've named above. Since magic can also be used in melee combat (Ranma's specialty) it's just another reason for him to be interested. Besides, if he knows magic, then he can fuse mana and ki in order to use Kanka.

About the tournament... When Ranma sees Takamichi's (death-glasses) Iai-ken (those pressure/light beam punch/strikes he uses against Negi), you think you could have him copy them? He knows the Amaguriken (I assume), so the pocket Iai-ken shouldn't be beyond him... Imagine Takamichi's expression when Ranma uses his best technique just like that...

Keep up the good work!
KitsuneOverlord
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
Hm... A Ranma/Negima crossover. It has been a while since I saw one of these, and what do you know, it doesn't suck! What a surprise. Seriously, all the other Ranma/Negima xovers I've read so far really SUCKED big time. So it's nice to see one that doesn't.

The Vote: Kaede (I'd prefer it if Ranma could get Setsuna AND Kaede, but I guess I shouldn't hope overly much for that to happen...)

Keep up the good work!
Rose1948
2008-05-31 . chapter 2
::chuckles:: Nice chapter! I like how the story's developing.
Sean Malloy-1
2008-05-31 . chapter 2
Nuice job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more to this fic soon.
Firehedgehog
2008-05-30 . chapter 2
giggles
James Axelrad
2008-05-29 . chapter 2
pretty good chapter.
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