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melborousse 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseafter finally reading all of the parts i have to say every story was beautiful. thank you for writing these. mel.
gonnabemarine 2008-03-31 ch 31,	abuseA beautifuly perfect ending.
Koolchamp 2008-03-31 ch 31,	abuseA very beautiful ending to this series of one-shots. You made it! Congratulations! Well done. All 31 of these little one-shots were written superbly. You are one heck of a writer. You have introduced me to a few pairings that I've never thought about, and you have gone over pairings, that I have read before, in a wonderful fashion. Now I believe you deserve a break. If you do decide to take a break, relax and enjoy it. You've earned it. Take care now. Cheers! (raises soda class in air)
lonely-lioness 2008-03-31 ch 31,	abusewoah. you have my complete respect for this whole piece of work. I would have NEVER survived this whole month! And most of the stories really were very,very amazing! Kisses
Koolchamp 2008-03-30 ch 30,	abuseChapter 29: The interaction between Abby and Kate is perfect. It's really fun to read it. Chapter 30: Powerful chapter this one is. We all have our demons, but when we focus to much on them we forget about the people around us and how much they care for us, so naturally we push them away when they try to help. Sadly Jenny does this. I also feel sad for Ziva, who was only trying to help. Powerful chapter. As with all of your storys/chapters, these two were written wonderfully. No grammatical or spelling mistakes that I could see. Only 1 more to go. Yahtzee! Cheers!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-30 ch 30,	abuseokay... that didn't end to happily... nice writing though
gonnabemarine 2008-03-29 ch 29,	abuseE! i love this!
Koolchamp 2008-03-28 ch 28,	abuseIs there like some self-help course or something on how to review a chapter on time? Chapter 25: A little of Abby's unknown past, I love it. Also, Kate can be suprising to all of us sometimes. ^_^ Chapter 26: You have done it again. Writing a pairing that I never lent any time to thinking about. I gotta say though, this pairing has some potential, even if it is a bit out of the ordinary. Chapter 27: Abby's own guardian angel...with a gun(s), a knife, and assassin training, but a guardian angel non-the-less. ^_^ Too bad Abby passed out before they could kiss. Well maybe next time. ;) Chapter 28: Lucky, lucky Ziva. I'm really starting to like this pairing, but I've yet to find many fics focusing on these two. You meantioned in a previous respone to a review that you had written a a series of one shots involving this couple, but you haven't posted it yet. Any chance you will? Only three more one-shots to go. You're so close. Can't wait to read the last three. Keep it up. Take care. Cheers!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-28 ch 28,	abusenot my favorite pairing, but great writing none the less. keep it up!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-27 ch 27,	abuseawesome job!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-26 ch 26,	abusehahahahah OMG i loved it!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-25 ch 25,	abuselove it. love it. love it!
Koolchamp 2008-03-24 ch 24,	abuseThat she did. Its always fun to read fics about the past of the NCIS characters. A very nice chapter. Suspensful. Well done. Can't wait for tomorrows chapter. Keep up the awsome work. Take care. Cheers! (where everyone know your name...sorry couldn't help myself)
Koolchamp 2008-03-23 ch 23,	abuseThe uncertanties that come with taking the relationship to the next level. I always love reading stories/chapters about that. They are most of the time very interesting to read. Another lovely chapter. I, personally, think that Kate should give sleeping in the coffin a try. Never know, she might like it. ^_^ Keep it up. Cheers!
gonnabemarine 2008-03-22 ch 22,	abuseI love that you are so dedicated in your writing. after the 31 slices are up, do you think you could write a full length kate/abbyor abby/ziva story? you write so well and theyre arent really any good stories out there with this pairing. i can co-write or betta or be your muse or whatever.

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