I don't know what exactly it is about the way you paint their relationship, but the dynamic is just about /perfect/. ♥

I really liked the way you characterized them and how they interact, even in just the space of a few hundred words at a time. There's this lingering sense of Agito's fear and Akito's more level-headed calm. I also really appreciated how you see little bits of Akito's intelligence here.

Cheers to Akito/Agito keeping interest alive in Air Gear (though recent chapters are making me very unhappy.:

Oh wow, I didn't expect to see such great fics, since air gear has such a small fanfic base.. but DAMN.

Akito kissing the mirror? I thought, "AUGHWTFISGOINGON??!" but that scene is so well executed. Love it love it love it

I make it a point to not add things to my favorites without leaving a review, but...
There are no words.
This is one of the most bittersweet things I have ever read. It hurts, to think that - yes, someday Ikki is bound to leave them behind. And Agito will disapear.
...I am usually so much more articulate than this, but I don't remember the last time a story has had me almost in tears by the end without me even being able to define /why/. I don't know if I ever have.

'Forever is how long this will never last' is now on my favorite quotes list. Because... just because.

I love how you write Agito and Akito interacting. Hee, and how Ikki affects the both of them, especially Agito, is just lovely. Great work with this!

~fd97

Why don't people acknowledge the deep, multi-fauceted fics instead of those that obsess over the superficial aspects of characters? *complete indignation!* Anyways, what I'm trying to say is, the biggest reason why I love this fic is that without force, without exaggeration, without artificiality, you encompass the entirety of Akito (darker than most people give him credit for)and Agito (who has a capability to love that no one sees.) And it's all done with simple langauge that's all the more elegant in its only-straight-foward-in-its-delivery-but-shattering-in-its-implications poignancy. I was taken by surprise, but ultimately very touched, at how very invested BOTH of them are in Ikki--you know that "he's the main hero that touches everyone's lives!" thing in the manga? I didn't buy it there. I buy it here. It's just...sweet and breaking and shows so much deep understanding on your part, but the way it's written it becomes so completely and obviously right. I mean...wow.

Nice! But i've to admit, that kissing the mirror thing was strange >.> lol. Keep up the good work! :D