Reviews for Hannah and Patrick WalkerAnd the twins problem

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TonyDiNozzoFan101 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abusegreat chapter... love your story... update son
Intarverbs 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseThis isn't good. There are serious grammatical errors here and there's no descriptive text to give the story context and make it understandable. Sad to say, but this does not deserve have an "XD lol plz update soon" bestowed on it. Keep practicing, though - you'll get better the more you write.