I love this! Update soon!

I liked it please continue,

I love Charlie to death

This is great! You should really think about continuing it! I love how you waited until the end to sort of tell what happened, but didn't say everything- it really builds up the suspense! Also, I like how it isn't from a certain person's POV for the whole time- that gets kind of job! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!

I think you should definitely keep going!

you have the best Salinger ideas.

LOVE it

I so miss this show,...and SO wish seasons 3 would come out on dvd...i like how you brought us into the future... )

a good start! an interesting story line! just one small critisism, check your spelling and grammer once you have written a chapter because there are a few mistakes eg you put lied instead of lay. looking forward to more!