I hope you update, I really like were this is going!

Ahh, lovely lovely slash!! Scorps/Sub-Zero = loveliness!! Wonderful mpreg too!! Mileena needs someone, so yay for you!! I hope you do continue this one eventually!! Right now you've probably got other works to finish first so no worries!! Hm...she musta been crying hard to cry blood...no offense...but is that even possible?! Thanks muchly!! Bye~~!!

*Grins* This fic is so freaking cool! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

OK, let me start by saying I do like the idea you have here. The Johnny/ Mileena key/keyhole thing is intriguing whatever it means, as is the idea of Mileena wanting to truly exist (I have an Ermac story that runs along the same lines).
So all good so far, however, the spelling is off a bit at times (you put 'write' instead of 'right' at one point.)
Speach should always begin with a capital and you should use comma's more often instead of full stops.

Again the story and idea is good but you should spend a couple of minutes during typing doing a spell and grammar check. Hope I've been helpful to you :)

Great story pls continue

Continue soon please!! This story sounds fascinating!! Yay for slash! Never played Mortal Combat much, I want to though!! I somewhat know some of the characters though!! So, um...GO ME! heh heh XD

Continue soon please (again) for I would LOVE to know what happens next soon!! Thank you!! Asta la by bai!

Sweet, I can't wait for more.