XD You know, even your prose sounds like your poetry. I liked this; it has the same abstract beauty as "Laws of Devining," but I must confess that I am a little confused. What exactly was Al upset about?
Great writing, in any case! ^_^

That's... really disturbing.

plotbunnies... I don't get those that often anymore. anyway, to review, it's beautiful and an Elricest story I don't find all that disturbing, which is an accomplishment. it's a very pretty drabble.