I felt like another review. Dunno why. Damn...I do get it, though. At first, I thought Natsuki had abandoned her, but apparantly, that wasn't the case. <:C Sniff sniff Why the ** am I still tearing?

I...just...wow. I, I so didn't expect the ending of this story. I thought it was, like, the other way around and, wow. This story, the ending, brought tears to my eyes. No, really, ** tears welled up in my eyes and **. Not very many sad stories can bring tears to my eyes. In fact, only a few can. But you...T-T

GAH! YOU KILLED THEM BOTH!? T^T huhuhuh *sniff* *sniff* NU! Cruel world! GAH! really wonderful story , I liked how considerate Nao was in this

Are you intentionally trying to make me cry?
Goshers, this was really good. I'm in love with this story. Seriously.

Wowzers. This totally fits the song, which I was listening to while reading this.
I like the way you wrote this, repeating things and the like.

noes they both die DX

such a sad story and depressing, yet beautifully written. X3

well holy crap...damn... that was depressing as hell but definitely not poorly written. very good story, and as morbid as it is to say im happy as long as they ended up together

Oh woah, you've entered the "let's kill Shiznat" thing too. Aw, I love it kookie. I really do. I need to go and curl up in a dark corner now.

very interesting

D: HOW DARE YOU PULL AT MY HEART STRINGS!

-sniffle- it was so beautiful.

Read this story.
Listen to "Together we will live forever" by Clint Mansell while doing.

And end up crying.

gosh such a sad tragedy T.T
atleast they died together :'[

:( I hate the sad fanfics...Nice but its evil.

it is so tragic.. cant bear the two to die..

O.O...Speechless...